hahaha I like this kind of novels, where the mc has to make the future wife fall in love so as not to die tragically xd...................................
Van Van Van, your tactics are awesome just enjoy every plot that is happening. Wow thanks for great chapter I really do enjoy. Keep up the good work
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Actually, I don't want to write a review this early but I found this novel quite gems. The MC really cautions in his every action which makes him more smarter than other novels that related to the modern setup.Right now(Chapter 7) there are 2 potential waifu appearing in the story and MC didn't immediately fall in love with them by just their beauty. I think it's good development on this aspect.The other things that I really love it on this novel is its length of the chapters were quite long it should be around 3k words, compared to those 1k words per chap make this novel more readable.I can see the improvement of grammar from the authors every chapter, I hope that you can keep up this good work. Cheers.
Keep the good work! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I've been searching for this novel to read.Please continue updating...I really like this one... Looking forward for this novel...I'll give my best support for this one✊☺️
Writing Quality is great, there are no rough sentences, easy to understand and the way you write the fighting scenes are good.(Kiss Of Death, Oof... I remembered DitF) Stability Updates are also good, I assume you update almost everyday. Story Development is also good, the pace is good, the fighting are good... Though, I think some of the elements are already used though, but there's no harm done, it is still unique it it's own way. Character Design is good, in Ch1, there are already too many characters, there are those that are based on some Movie or Greek mythology(Thrain, son of Thor, Oof.. Reminds me of Lord of the Rings) World Background is good, futuristic world with advance gaming technology...Seems. great.GOOD WORK AUTHOR, KEEP IT UP.*THUMBS UP*
Alright review time. I just finished the first 40 chapters and let me tell you... I am absolutely in grossed in the world building of the story. I am going to spend the next couple hours reading the last 20 chapters and I will write more at that point but let me tell you the story is funny, witty, and a good overall fun time. I think it’s worth your time to read it I think you will enjoy it and all I can say is I am more than likely going to be daily reviewing this just like 48 hours in a dayufffc.
this isn't too bad. I'm worried for people who write bad reviews about this novel. Did your brain functioning well? Cause you write bad review just based on the synopsis.. and the fact that this novel come out first before your doctor novel.... better you go to hospital and get quarantine .. I really doesn't wish people like you exist.. oh yeah the fact that you hate this novel cause it based on game genre? well the doctor novel has game ui too right? Ughh remove your stupid thinking
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Es bastante buena la verdad pero no deberías volverlo tan op de golpe sino que sea más lento para que la historia se desarrolle y tenga rivales así sería muy buena la historia además métele ecchi no joda