As long as he was willing to safeguard her, no one would be able to ambush her.
I like this novel but it has issues it has to deal with, especially the updates. They stopped updating, then dumped 73 chapters then stopped again.. If they're intending to stop and fill up on chapter then dump them then just no... I'd prefer consistency like 1-2 chapters a day much more. By the time they dump, I've probably forgotten about this book, or given up on it.
9.5/10 This novel is great mc slowly goes to different worlds and you can say there is two parts of this novel before and after his academy? in some world mc establishes a power that pretty great much better than sects bassicly academy for entire world sort of thing which is insanly great plus he uses tech too while it seems for some reason author locked tech to our level even though at some point thousands of years have passed but whatever there could have been isnane development there but no.While its slow there are unqiue worlds here one i found litle weird but its unique and great cant have him just going to cultivation world after cultivation world the only problem is that at some point author lowered the population of his world? before it was 100 trilion and then reduced to 3 trilion?? i feel this is mtl doing but author below said that proportion of certain realm to global population was 1:4000 and that calculation made sense? so idk what author was smoking maybe he ment 3000 trilion? but it got changed in mtl idk.Other than that his academy doesnt get much screentime which is a shame there is a litle but not enough we get few characters pov but thats it when we could have gone more plus in main world after he establish his power its not talked for long time for about 200ch? i read it would have been great if we saw how people were schocked at new power and all that and we get like 10-20 ch focusing on that but noo...other than that not much to say thats bad novel is great especially since its more like kingdom building with litle bit of tech, it would have been better if we saw more of his academy and author could have made tech better but its kinda hard to write but even then he could have for sure made it better by idk combing cultivation and tech into one in like soul chip, like brain chip but since people here have souls into a soul quantum chip but no.... 9.5/10
This book is a lot of fun. Its amazing how much you can write about each game. I often forget our lovely players are still so young. Nothing has made me want to play a MOBA game more then this book
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the concept is good but the execution is soo terribly bad .i love an evil mc or a profit oriented mc that does what ever it take to achieve his goal but forcing the plot to limit an evil mc is just bad .if you wanna make an evil mc he need to be in control of everything he need to be 1000 steps over his enemy not some mc who only react never attack .btw the story flow is so slow with one relevant chapter in every ten.
The Story is Amazing and the Alternate Timeline of the Story is Progressing, The update on the Chapters needs to be improved a bit, can't wait for the part where Tzeentch, will join his brother to the Old World, and more reactions of every force's faction in the Old World, when they find out about the 4th Brother, which will be the champion of Tzeentch
I guess this is called a shameless author review, I won't say much just read the story, and I promise it's good, take my word on it ?
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currently my favorite novel even with how with how little chapters there are I hope you continue with this novel because it looks promising
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