First of all, it’s been dropped. It’s pretty funny a the start but It gets dragged on more and more each arc which gets boring. The multiple POVs aren’t well written especially when the MC isn’t actually the MC but his master according to how much the author spends time writing in the master’s POV. I was pretty disappointed as I wanted to see mc grow but the pace of the story was so slow he didn’t do much if anything at all after 100 ch. conclusion, 80% is centred around the master e.g. limelight, women, funny parts and POV, 10% is fang yu, 5% in fang lin (the MC) and the other 5% are the other characters.
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Another review after 2 weeks to help the author. the release rate has been consistent and the story progress at fast pace.
My name joy I was in my house one day and see man coming to my door, and sad who that and he sad him Sam ur boyfriend sad hoo, but I don't he not not so he enter my
I have read the first five chapters and I've got to say, it's the most unique realistic story out here in my opinion. Most of the stories are are romance but this story is seemingly taking things beyond. I was hooked in this story from the start. Reyansh is an extremely likeable protagonist and for someone who had mental issues, I can understand him a lot as well. Those inner monologues add a lot of depth of his character as well!Aryan, though, looks scum. I find him a lot interesting as well! I want to know more about him!My second favourite thing in the story so far is the amazing use of symbolism. In Chapter 2, the butterfly symbolism to symbolize Reyansh's future growth was beautifully written and in Chapter 4, the use of Anemone flower to symbolize (maybe) Vansh saving him from hopelessness or maybe some kind of anticipation regarding the two characters? He is my second favourite character so far and I really can't wait to read more!
Writing Quality: I love the authors breadth of vocabulary and effective sentence structure. The writing is clean and organized, making for an easy and enjoyable read. Stability of Updates:12 chapters have come out so far, with basically 1 chapter a day. So far stability is 5 stars.Story Development:The story has a nice pace. The intense parts are quick, not drawn out like many novels on here. The relaxing parts are relaxed. Overall the pace is a little quicker than most, but I don't mind that.Character Design:5 stars because it is just starting, and for 12 chapters the author does a good job of not revealing too much too quickly. There are your stereotypical characters: the ignorant, hard working main character. the mysterious and potentially dangers master/teacher. the hermetic, but kind and generous friend of the master/teacher. None of which are bad things. The story still has lots of room to develop and expand upon those basic character types.World Background:At 12 chapters there isn't a whole lot, which is to the authors credit. I like that the background is developed as the MC learns it. Being a kid from east jesus nowhere it makes sense that the kid is ignorant of the world.
really a racist novel, there's a 50-50 chance of anyone being demon but everyone decides that demons are the bad guy and law enforcers are good guys. when demon got powers they did bad things and law enforcers had a sence of justice and even if some demon loots the bank or something, the law enforcers with a "justice" mind decides that all demons are bad. and for normal demons(except MC) leaving their demon layer would be fatel as enforcers can destroy their layer while they're away, so demons shouldn't cause as much troubles as a enforcer would!
Another Author Review here. READERS...PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS BECAUSE OF THE EARLY CHAPTERS. IF IT FEELS RUSHED TO YOU, PLEASE KEEP ON READING... I AM EDITING MY CHAPTERS ONE BY ONE EACH DAY.. THAT IS ALSO THE REASON WHY MY UPDATES ARE SLOW.THE FUTURE CHAPTER QUALITY HAS ALSO GREATLY INCREASED. SO PLEASE DON'T JUMP THE GUN RIGHT AWAY.I hope you read it till the first volume before making assumptions. Thank you.
The story is well written, the plot intriguing, and the story has potential. keep up the good work, I enjoyed reading your story and hope to see more in the coming updates
A very interesting story with a steady pace of building up the plot and characters. A good amount of comedy which creates a variety of mood in the story as well.
Hmmm only 3 novels this week? Im only gonna read two of them including this one and the other is a secret but you can have a hint on what it is so here “Roar” nonono not “Roar X3” Im not a furry i swear
Author here trying to write a book to please the average reader. There is some suggestive material, but nothing too overt and over the top, and lots of fun moments that I think are somewhat enjoyable. Please feel free to read it and have a good time.