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I like the concept I give 5 starsPlz don’t dropI hope u won’t drop I go read this novel nowGood luck in writing! d(￣ ￣)140 characters140 characters 140 charactersThis is to fill 140 characters
writing this just after volume 4 (148), great world building, nice way of incorporating the other worlders and the magic system is well developed. characters are unique, the world is unique and the story is only just getting started (up until this point)
CAUTION!!!!! The author decided to cuc the MC. by turning all women into futas to do each other, get out while you can. Run as fast as you can before the army of futas come to get you.
To lazy to write anything but I like the story want more Recommend...................................................................................
Okay I just read to chapter six and in all honesty I’m not gonna read any further untill some editing has been done since it has been devolved into the level of a machine translated story I feel like if the author can fix the mistakes the story would be quite good but honestly the grammatical errors and the fact that the way it’s written is similar to how a child who has just started speaking talks is ruining this for me There are words missing incorrect tense used spelling mistakes while not many from what I could tell are still there I really want to like this story but untill it has been edited HEAVILY I might add I will not be returning I don’t mind that it’s bl and transmigration type stories are one of my favourites I sincerely hope the author will take an editor into consideration since he has decided to write a novel in English
Please for the love of God, do not translate this. The best thing I can say about this novel is that the grammar is alright and there are no spelling errors.The story is bad, bland characters, even worse world building and not a single original idea.To regurgitate: The MC is a transmigrator with an OP system, but instead of learning about it or thinking about his future he spents his time pleasing a strange women. He is literally rich and has an OP system. A little patience and he could become a productive member of society, which he does not because he is way to lazy. World building is shit because there is literally no way to become more than dirt without a beast summon. Like any society would function without guaranteeing the survival of the next generation, at least for those moderately wealthy. Hire someone for God's sake. Nothing more gets explained, there is no background or logic in this novel. The MC has the arrogance of a transmigrator, the lack of brain of the worst kind of dick steered beta male and the depression of a total washup. The female characters make no sense, have no consistent background or motivation.Do yourself a favor and do not read this.
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The translation seems pretty terrible especially when it comes to levels. It is really inconsistent. The idea behind the cheat is pretty good. Personally, I think this idea has potential as it isn't super overpowered and the MC still has to work for his power, but at the same time I feel like it could be nerfed a bit more. As for the characters, they are horribly inconsistent. One minute you have people groping each other in the chow hall and the next you have the author talking about how conservative people are in this world and they aren't familiar with those sorts of things. The author can't seem to make up their mind of the characterizations/world setting which is unfortunate.
Tbh this is the over all best book I have read, although it is troublesome to read on my phone and not an actual book I decide to still read, simply because I absolutely love this
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why not read this novel: the protagonist is a simp trash, you will constantly have to read descriptions of useless and unimportant women, where the protagonist will make some stupid decision just because according to the author's logic '' no man can't control himself around a woman and acts like an excited dog'' and then there will be something like '' the protagonist doesn't know why he acted like that, and now all that remains is to get out of this situation ''. sometimes the protagonist seems to be intelligent and make rational decisions, sometimes he is stupid and ignorant and does not seem to have the ability to use the brain, sincerely this novel and practically 99% of the novels gives the impression that if not all, the cultivators are retarded and unable to think rationally. over and over and over again the protagonist makes stupid decisions, because of women, if he were to follow logic, he would have surely died by now, this is by far one of the worst protagonists I have ever had the displeasure to know, if it is with a woman, he acts leniently.