DivineKamah
As of chapter 30, I'm gonna say that this novel is incredibly frustrating.As far as the plot goes, the synopsis claims that the MC has returned to the past multiple times in order to save humanity, but the author also (in the very first chapter) made the MC choose a mystery option that the entire plot is supposedly based around. And yet, the author has no plans on revealing what it could possibly be. The author then proceeds to shove this 'ooooh cool and mysterious' vibe down your throat.As far as characters go, this is probably my least favorite aspect. One would normally expect that a 'second chance' novel would feature a MC who knows what it's like to be the very last surviving human. But it feels like nothing close to that. MC acts immature, naive, and downright idiotic at times. Because the author didn't reveal what the MC chose as his option, nobody can fully speculate why he acts this way, so the author deserves the flaming he is getting for that. It feels more like the main character is his actual 19 year old self, but received a few snippets of memory from the future. That's it.To sum it all up, the author is trying WAY too hard to implement too many things into this novel, and instead of fitting together like a puzzle, the elements are just tumbling around together without any cohesiveness. I don't think I'm going to continue this novel
as someone who already read the lastest raw chapter 1446 I would give review this book.this story is so awesome & a masterpiece because basically our mc Xu Zhi literally play Civilization game in real life after he become the motherbrood of Zerg Race.also after chapter 200 player become more & more involve & pull some interesting reference like making digimon gadget, making potion system, playing at planetary civilization of minecraft (which fbi call minecraft developer because suspected of being alien) there's no crappy Harem, racism, chinese superior nationalism, face slapping arrogant young master since MC did stuff behind the scene mostly with some hilarious yet believable & logical explanation that mae you even believe the bullshit of not for the fact you could read just how contrast the POV between Xu Zhi & other People.unlike every single Previous 173 Generation of Zerg Mother race who pull genetic invasion against other race & directly rule most of universe, Xu Zhi took completely different approach regarding his cultivation & journey that he use most of 6 main abilites of Zerg race to create his own Brand ant sized civilization with the Zerg special ability of High Dimension Time Dillation rates of 100 year for zerg race while 1 day for other people while at the same time Xu Zhi put Login interface at Virtual Reality Glasses & put these Player in real life (mostly chinese) into the body of spora, these player gonna evolve these spora whike the most potential spora will be put into one of these Zerg ant civilization created by Xu Zhi of course Xu Zhi make sure he took back most info regarding the gene & knowledge from these ant sized civilization.each civilization have different heroic figure that drive the progress of civilization while most country on earth hell bent intend to put some scientist inside Xu Zhi's spora game in order to advance their country tech & military power via incorporating some data from the ant sized civilization ( which hilariously Xu Zhi effortlessly troll these scientist hahaha XD). this is absolutely not those typical self insert, wish fulfillment, harem, face slapping arrogant young master with repeated plot story so don't worry & enjoy this story.also at chapter 1445 the previous zerg motherbrood which die at very early chapter get resurrected & every single mystery regarding the zerg mother brood were explained so don't worry about another unexplainable system cheat of mc since this story completely defy my expectation.
Haha I like itI find it quite amusing! The combination of One Piece and One Punch Man elements is hilarious. Saitama's presence adds an extra layer of humor.
garbage. mc is not bright, useless parents, stupid parent, no triplets
I love it very much, though there are a few errors, but it’s nothing that takes away from the story. I wish author would take a break from his other books so that he can focus on this more. The plot is so good.. the drama, the suspense, mix of real life activities and pure fiction in basketball. Very good mix and compliments well with the story.
fantastic lol love it
I just love this book so much! you deserve all the stars in the sky dear!✳️✳️✳️
Hello author. I am so inlove with this love story of Rafael and Emerald. You are so brilliant, loving the twist, the role of the characters, and how the story goes. Keep writing romantic stories like this. Congratulations.
Loved this story of redemption. Also refreshing to see a Alpha who isn’t a man whore prior to the mate bond kicking in
Sure this story is dark and that may not be for you, but some of us truly love this story so just because you don’t like the theme doesn’t mean it is bad. And for those saying grammatical errors well maybe English isn’t the author’s first language are you a professional writer?! LOVE THIS BOOK!
So disappointed. Good Novel won't refund the points for repeated chapters, and I don't want to pay more for repeats. It's too bad. Good book, but I'm not wasting more on it. Now I'm seeing more chapters in the 30s are repeats... oh well. moving on.
a very good novel
