I enjoyed reading a few chapters but it can get better
writing quality takes a very steep, very hard dive about 60 chapters in. english writing is in past tense, not present. the story is a bit pedantic, and lacks any sort of development. the characters are stock tropes and stereotypes, and fifty chapters in they have yet to develop in any way, minor or major (no, levelling up and gaining skills do not count as character development). the world has little to no background information given. you know almost nothing about it. the characters magically know about monsters, attributes, skills and abilities, but nothing is ever explained to the reader.
This is an amazing story and and you have a clear goal with where you want it to go and great world building and character development. I enjoy reading the novel.
Nice work Writing isn't easy And let be frank am the author, I'm reviewing my book by myself because I know what it's take to bring up and idea and write.Please drop your frank reviews about this story as we continue writing.Thank you
This story has immense potential, writing wise it is very good. Pacing is kind of off sometimes and either needs to slow down in some cases, or is just going too fast. These are just minor things that the author can get better at quickly. As for update stability I cant say much yet as there are only 4 chaps. Worldbuilding is solid along with character design. Cheers!
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Writting grammar is good. Easy to readStory starts out with presenting a plot for a fight for survival story with lots of power leveling arcs, and is instead a "im stronk tkme for slice of life" story. So do note its not what is advertised, it is pretty good though as slice of life in a not really poat apocalypse. The characters have honeatly gained access to amenities and other rhings far too easily.The big time skips honestly dont do the story any favors. Plenty of content to be had during those time points. Its honestly a shame the author didnt take the time to craft it out.Characters are noraml. Nothing really aticks out positively or negatively.World background is a slightly different take on an apocalypse wifh magic and monsters but doesnt really delve into it at all.Overall Id rate it a 6/10. Very average.Really needs a more thorough story board. As well, it also needs more fleshed out content. Time skips are not replacements to good plot.
Hmm, what's that? I'm shameless for reviewing my own work? Well, you know how things go. As you experience life, shameless encounters are bound to cross your path and make your life more colorful. Hmm, I didn't have to go so far and give myself 5 stars in every category? Why of course I did. I simply take pride in what I do.
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only 2 chapters i will come back again .?
Very entertaining so far, waiting for more!sfdfrtggfhgfhgfjftfssfgfdsfgfgdfgfddffgrgdgfgdfrtwwdsdser........................................
such an interesting novel and I recommend it to everyone. I had to add this book to my library. Author you're doing such a great job. Keep it up.