The pacing in this chapter is absolutely relentless and I cannot complain because it works so well. We start with the old man explaining Natal Divine Abilities — that's heavy exposition, cosmic-level worldbuilding, the kind of thing that could bog down a chapter if handled poorly. But he delivers it efficiently, demonstrates his power, awakens Su Xi's ability, drops the Spirit Awakening quest, and vanishes. All within the first few pages. Then we cut to Su Xi examining her sphere, and immediately the property management announcement pulls her back to Earth — literally. The lottery scene is where the pacing really shines. The author could have made this a long bureaucratic process, but instead we get the community center, the line, the device, the red light flashing, and within minutes Su Xi is being whisked away by government officials. The exposition dump about Divine Affinity and God-Blessed individuals comes naturally through dialogue rather than narration, which keeps it moving. And then the structure does this beautiful pivot at the end — from the high-stakes cosmic mystery of finding Yuan Chen and awakening Blue Star to the deeply personal moment of reuniting with Niuniu at the departure gate. It's like the story takes a deep breath and reminds us that behind all this galactic-scale drama, there are real human (well, human-plus-god) emotions at play. The chapter ends on that reunion note and I am DYING to read what happens next.
Wei Jin opened the box and the red bracelet with the gold engravings appeared in front of her. Having thought of the bracelet she couldn't contain her surprise at seeing it. The bracelet truly did cost a high sum and it would have taken her another year before she could buy it herself. She didn't want to rely on her parents to buy her something like that, this time. She wanted to get it herself.
Rosè:" oh you said you don't want to hear them yet because of your mission for Kim Family....and you are still working for them..."
Then just like a lightning that suddenly struck them a light noise can be heard *Beep*
"You idiot!" she shouted at him and rushed towards him. Charlie really thought he's going to get punched, yet he stood his ground and just closed his eyes. He felt a soft bump. When he opened his eyes he saw her wrapped around him. She tackled him in a hug. He felt something warm and wet on his chest where her face was buried. A smile crept on his face as he wrapped his arms around her.
Agi : 2
Garp was getting irritated with these people looking at him like an animal at a zoo so spoke up in irritation " what are you people talking about? who the hell are you? what are you? how can you be alive for thousands of years? what is this place ? " he shouted at them in rapid-fire questions much to Roger's amusement though he too had to agree that he needed answers, besides what does he have to fear he's dying anyway.
Lara notices the bandages on his arm and asks about it.
Xia wei gives a wry smile and replies: "Thanks anyways lets hurry" and thought in her head 'voice I will return to thank you properly later farewell"
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(Kai)