The pace is so slow that it quickly become extremely boring, I dropped after 8 chapters of them talking and descriptions, there was 1 fight and the point of that fight was just to make tje characters TALK EVEN MORE
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Just the shameless act of rating your own work, you know.
I very much enjoy this story so far but I’m wondering will he always be super inferior or that kinda what I get the feel from him or will he have something happen to him that makes him super good. All I see for him the the foreseeable future is him falling way behind?
Was a decent read, ending was alright I guess
Worst system ever plus story doesnt make any sense at all. MC magically save his dad plus died and save his dad again????? I mean.. WTH.. and the system talk too much. It should aid the MC not blabber this and that.. sigh
It's trash. Actually maybe worse than that, some trash is recyclable. I don't know who the target audience is with a psycho MC like this story has but I hope I never meet them. If you've ever read a bad story whereas every man the MC meets wants to r*pe, murder and steal from them. This is a story from those peoples perspective. Why would anyone want to root for them, I don't know. Even terrible stories treat these characters as cannon fodder to show how much better their MC is. One of the worst trail reads I've read. You've been warned.
Where's the rest this is so good☹☹☹☹☹☹But i shall waitttt!!!...I like this more than the other one...though they have similar mc in the sense that they both have some undead nature. This mc has alot more sense???
it was a good book and I enjoyed reading it
So, I have just finished catching up to the current chapters (167 at this point it time), and I have to say, I really love it.The writing quality is quite good, except for the occasional grammar or spelling mistake, and does not do anything to make your reading experience worse or anything of the sort.For stability of updates, I don't really know myself, but by going from when the chapters were released before, it seems quite stable.Now, story development for me was good. The pace for some might seem a bit slow since for the most part, it's just talking about his daily life and stuff, but I find it enjoyable. Most people thought that the grandmother was annoying and didn't like her, but she seemed ok enough to me, and in recent chapters, it clears things up about her so it's fine.The character design of Ace (mc). I enjoy watching Ace's character development and watching him mature, make friends, stream, make music, and all of the sorts. He enjoys his life to the fullest and is a genius, which for me is entertaining. He makes friends easily, and is nice, but is still careful and not naive, and can read everyone like a book.World background, not much to say. The setting is basically the same, starting from about 2015, and shifting events around a little to fit the storyline. There are some real-life people who are included, as well as some made up ones, so nothing too different.All in all, I would recommend this novel, so give it a try, and if you like it, good for you, if not then it's just not for you, so that's that, and we all have our preferences, so it's fine.
Hi guys, author speaking here. Well, just to make things clear, this isn’t a novel, it’s was I call a mini novel. It has little chapters of fast reading and develops at a relatively fast speed. If you guys find some writing errors, please tell me because although English is my native language, I moved to Brazil as a child and my English isn’t that good. I’ll post chapters every week day here and at a writing community in the Animo App. Hope you guys like it, goodbye.
If someone edit this please comment here so I will know xD... The story is good and very creative its just that the grammar is.... LOLOLOSLOLSOALSOALS