All in all i made it to chapter 2. I normally give at least 20 chapters of a read for a novel i choose to read. NoneTheless, this one i cant read any further. Why? Here it comes: Guy saves the girl, she r**** him, extracts his yand eneRgy so he cannot cultivate and is crippled. then she gets quadruplets and wants HIM to Take RESPONSIBILITY. the audacity. then she goes there and talks to him like he is tradh, she wonders why he is a „good for nothing and is wEak.“ Worse, the mc takes it like it is nothing. seriously? How stupid is that. /////////////////imagine the roles are reversed: Girl gets r****, then has to get children and is also forced to take care of them. now, that doeSnt sound good does it? /////////////alll in all, the novel is as bad as it can get.
Frankly it is well written. But it's filled with the typical inconsistency of a generic Chinese novel. The guy, he is three years old but he travels around the empire with his so-called master. Tell me even with Chinese novels which master does this. Usually it's around the age of 10 but hey...Example: I was born in the biggest empire on the continent, a few chapters later we learn that he is barely above average. Basically, you should expect this kind of inconsistency. And also it's the kind of story where every place the protagonist passes, there is a problem that suddenly it's solved by his system so it's the kind of novel that is really average. And even this note is because we can easily find worse.
Okay it mostly boils down to two main issues. 1: The writing is awful. I am referring to grammar and spelling.2: It premiums at 20 chapters. This limits any insights into most all categories in the review so I defualt to low ratings because in the first twenty chalters nothing is given out which makes this story worth buying more chapters except the genre itself. In fact there is the aforementioned poor writing which makes you think twice about EVER giving the story your money. TL;DR : Dont waste Your time on an early premium story with poor writing unless you have absolutely nothing else to spend fast passes on. 1.8/5
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We need him to start becoming more dominant please stop making him a cuck person because it basically needs to be solved and is getting tiresome so just make him,find his sister and mom and ignore other people this sounds better and more reasonable than continuing this feeding his rage path because he get betrayed just make him badass that's all okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Website:qidian chinaViews:520thousandRating:8.1(72 ratings) Chapters:3966Status:ongoingRanking:72 Word count:8.25millionPrevious work:MMORPG:Rebirth of legendary guardian
Well written author, please update more chapters
book is so addictive....... damn can't wait for the next update
Hey your works are amazing. I have read Mafia's Angel aroundd 10 times. Everytime i finish reading it i go back reading again. Good luck to u for yr future works.
Why there is no update?
its taking too long begore new chspters are posted