this is the story of a clever idiot.yup very very clever IDIOT.and he is also lucky goddesses most favorite that she always farts on his face when required.the story goes like this till now.the mc is very clever but he chooses to have a cute pet that helped him(which he got as a reward) than a strong pet even when he can die any seacond and he also meets random women(no matter who they are just being women is enough) and the women will get into trouble that can never be solved by MC and then MC will again become totally brainless at that moment and be like i will rather die for this random women i just met than leave her and then the lucky goddess is like "oh nooo! the brainless saviour of women is dying" and she will fart on his face which solves his problems and MC wins.most ridiculous story i read.if the story had even a little bit of common sense this idiot would definitely die many times in the beginning itself. dont read this if you dont want to waste your time on the story of another one of those lucky bastards
It's nice, a little like A Record of a mortal's journey to immortality. Yes so you should try it............ Djbdidhdihdudbfhdhdydyebdhudhdhdhdh
Surprisingly good. Translation style is slightly simple, but I don't mind it. The story follows our protagonist as he begins to learn martial arts, but with a slight catch: every successful practice session improves his proficiency. In other words, as long as he spends enough time, he can perfect any martial he practices. In theory at least. Pretty good so far, very down to earth, and the system is fairly minimal. Best novel in the current batch for sure.
Writing Quality:A lot of mistakes but the author has been improving. So that's good, It would be a good idea to edit the first chapter though.Updates:From a lot weekly to 1 weekly. Authors say he spends 5 hours per chapter and can't do anymore. Let's believe him for now.Story:Great idea, meh execution. Focus HEAVILY on interactions between characters on the family, basically isolated from the world or government. No suspension from the government why a billionaire would construct a prepper house? Plus the information the military have? They can't connect the dots?A lot of things that in real life you would be questioned and even detained.I don't like the idea that he doesn't explore other ideas in his mind until he resolves which idea would stick around and his reason. He just have to accept that and continue.Character: Awful, just awful.Like MANY MANY authors that writes stories of people coming back from the future they forget about the personality changes that would have. Their different approaches in life, their way to deal things, if you are in a world where you have to hunt constantly for food I don't think you would be very adept to diplomatic solutions the first day you come back to the past.Second point: Loli and sister complex. The author tries too hard to make their interactions between the siblings cute. Is cringe as f.uck. I would skip them since most authors tend to rant about sis-con a lot (that took almost 5 chapters of skips mind you).The author doesn't place himself in the MC place so the interactions are awkward and cringe mostly. And all the member of the family trust 100% in him, even if the changed 180 degrees from day to night (Not even gonna ask him to see a doctor or send him to a clinic for checks).World Background:The author really tries to give a background about the story but really can't deliver in an interesting way to tell it. So he just info dump it. I put 4 stars because of the efforts he makes. But the author needs to learn to deliver the background information when is needed, not when is possible.Final Thoughts:I put myself in the MC place. I would approach it in a different way, but each person is different. I will tell you some ideas and you can take it into an account or discard it (but telling it in the story why) to make the readers think that the MC isn't going to that place because that is the perfect plan and we just have to accept it.1- Self Sustained environment. Yes, you put facilities and all that, but a "fortress house" has to ensure food and other stuff for all the population there. Clean water? Where the wastes go? Farming? Specialist about this? 2- He knows his principal enemies will be the military and mutated beast. But I don't see anything in his plan planning to counter that, only hide. I would hire scientists to teach me how to analyze animal behavior, ho to detect their weak points, alimentations, territory marks, footprints. How to dissect animals, how to make armor/weapons of their hide and limbs,etc. SO MANY BETTER WAYS TO SPEND TIME. 3. Be A-ok with the government/military on the surface, but also monitoring them. Send some of the few personals he has to monitor them or pay an underground organization to have sent them information. Information is power.TL,DR: 15 yo MC who didn't grow in the 10y in the other world, Billionaire MC so difficult set to Very Easy, Sister Complex MC, Info Dumps of Backgrounds. 2.5 Stars. My principal problem is the MC mentality. Not even the story or the nonsense blind faith they have on him. My problem is his decisions that seem based on choosing the most expensive thing on each catalog and thinks he is good to go.
great start .....!, no comedy element yet .. have to see .. hope he gets harder options in future.. harem come on .. more monster girls n...
Need more chapters. Need more chapters. Need more chapters. Need more chapters. Keep up a regular pace at posting the chapters the story is a bit rigid and feels 2d but the later on chapters improve. Needs a lot of work. Thanks for writing an apocalypse novel (my favorite genre).Ps. Thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work. ??
Kinda sad i loved this but it looks like its not going to be continued. I was really hoping for another vrmmorpg! Now i shall cry in the corner.
Novel is very good. I read raws couple months ago. After few arcs author forgot there is a thing called Logic. So I dropped it. Villains will be at same or above cultivation of MC even though MC has system, terrible cultivation talent, adventures, his family support but even without all these Villains will keep up or have cultivation realm above MC. ALTHOUGH MC WILL HAVE MORE COMBAT POWER AND CAN EASILY DEFEAT THEM BUT STILL HOW CAN THEY HAVE MORE CULTIVATION REALM THAN MC EVN WITHOUT ALL OF THE MENTIONED ABOVE THINGS.
Lee Tao's here to answer all of your questions and doubts. However, don't expect me to give you everything. And the rating I gave to myself... do I even to explain? I'm Lee Tao, the one and only Harness Cultivator in the universe.
I've started with Blue Phoenix and Overthrowing Fate, CtH at start doesn't seem to be gr8, but going fwd it is coming close to BP in terms of story and character development. The most I liked is the Hui Yue entry and connection to BP
This story started great. So great in fact, that I moved on to the raws in the hopes of reading ahead and then...I dropped it. Why might you ask? Well... extreme nonsensical racism....spoilers to follow.....[spoiler]In the story the MC considers white Caucasians extremely inferior and even labels them as disgusting eggs ("white skin yellow hair"). He goes on to proclaim the absolute supremacy of Chinese traditions and history as well as insult and denigrate others including the biblical and Greek beliefs/mythology. Even Buddhism gets insulted and labeled inferior. He associates white people with Nazi symbols and Aryan beliefs while clearly painting a rather clear point of how the Chinese are superior. Not only that, but by chapter 150 he has already become strong enough to kill a "lame" and "loser" titan...[/spoiler]The arrogance of this MC and writer got beyond my tolerance and thus I decided there are many other series worth my time. The fact that the same ridiculous and fundamentally flawed mythical nonsense gets explained multiple times does not help either...
Rusak bgt bos grammar nya. Kalo ndak niat perbaikin mending ni ya pake bahasa indo aja. Mo baca jadi mager gara2 otak rusak duluan mahamin english ente.