GMSJakers
Bloody he'll is this a good story so ? . And get me bottle rum!
Welp, this story definitely starts with a bang. The atmosphere definitely feels like that of a new gen school, what with the adherence to technology, and of course, the over-the-top hype for pretty much anything that's entertaining or nice to look at. The story is definitely moving at a nice pace, and Darica... yeahhh. She's the bang of the story. wonder how that ties in with the Prologue
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interesting concept of writing . new way of thinking a story .. can be developed in a very good story
the book is a slow start so far I'm 18 chapter in and I'm enjoying it and hope it gets better and better. the main character seems interesting and some of the support character do also . so I'm hoping for some action soon
Muito bom, recomendo à todos a acompanhar não vão se arrepender. . ......................................................................................
From what I've read so far it's really good the only issue is the spelling and grammar. You have a good plot line and basic characters you will need to develop them more and double check for grammar
Wow, so far I am in love and it looks like the author is updating everyday. This is a story like no other, not predictable. Zombie/apocalyptic novels are usually all the same, but this one is so different! Like a breath of fresh air, I honestly cant wait for more! Yay!
This novel is my favorite by far and never fails to put a smile on my face with how silly it can be. However, when push comes to shove it can really hit you with the feels. The author lulled me into a false sense of security with the lighthearted comedy but as things develop I become increasingly worried that things will end in tragedy. But without stakes and a realistic possibility of loss how can you truley have a tense situation.
Love the book. It's definitely one of my favourites.It has a great and captivating story.Good spelling and grammar.There are a lot of little humorous interactions and situations that lighten up the occasionally rather suspenseful plot.The rare changes of perspective (contrary to those used by most, usually inexperienced, writers) further add depth to the characters and plot while increasing the suspense. And I just love it.Though I wish the updates where more consistent
I'm sad to see the author abandon their other world, even if it was brand new but I'm happy to see this new story as well. The summary is interesting enough
Nice novel, although is isn't the best its still impressive. Love this type of genre, at first I hated the games genre because it was repetitive (check any games novel at the top), however I always liked kingdom building and combining the two genre crated something new I really enjoyed. The humour is a good addition, please continue with it!
