I have to say, this author keeps getting better and better with his story writing. Please go ahead and read the book. On that note, if you're a lover or a fan of a fantasy, erotic succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
Read until chapter 55, nothing really happens. Auther just keeps on rambling about the future and events that play no significance to the current events. MC is your typical useless luck struck plot armor MC. Outside of making money through the stock market, which he pawned of to one of the female characters, he really doesn’t do anything important. The flow of the story is on the slow side and the events are so random that it ruins the reading experience. For the Auther. Don’t explain so much useless information. Show your story don’t tell. Show the MC having a meeting and telling each individual their goal and when they need to accomplish said goal by. In other words, you’re trying to make your MC this great leader without them showing any leadership skills. Don’t tell us why a character is going to be important or how they’re related to the MC, show us through their interactions with the MC. Example, when you had the two neighbors scene talking to his parents, don’t explain who they are. Instead just leave them until they show up in the main plot of the story. Then inform the readers using the interaction between the MC and the other characters. That’s all I’ve got for you. In summary it’s not a bad story, the author just needs to learn how to write better. An editor would help but I’m aware of how expensive that can get.
"It's not your fault. Everyone in here knows that you did what you think had to be done and was best for the Guild. No one could have predicted that this would happened" June said in comfort, gently squeezing one of her hand.
This one is good, however, it would be so much better if every chapter were long. overall, amazing.
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A wholesome story with enjoyable content. Good MC who isn't a loser, although he is still maturing, with likeable female leads and good progression. So far, by chap 33, the pace is quite slow, as it focuses on building up the MC's power and his relationships, but we can expect and exciting adventure in the long run. Author is also receptive to feedback, so start reading and share your views.
I've never read a novel here that goes into the depth of designing realistic backgrounds like this story. Really.The amount of effort that goes into making a story with actual explanations on is really difficult. I'll commend the author for their work. Writing is not easy in the slightest. Genuinely, the best part about the book is that it feels realistic for a fantasy world. I've read other novels that just throw in fancy magic stuff and random characters that just follow the MC around. Those are shallow. But Haku and his crew- you can actually relate.Although I haven't caught up completely yet, I came to do a review because this book needs more reviews for how good it is. The writing quality is fantastic, and the author put a ton of effort into cranking out this story. I'm grateful. Sometimes the story can stagnate for a bit, but there isn't another reason I think of that would make me think anything less of the story.For anybody who wants to try reading this book, I highly recommend it.Kudos!
iIjust started reading and it seems interesting so far!
This has to be the most adorable story about a rock that I have read since I was small. Some sad moments but otherwise saccharine sweet. Can hardly wait to read what happens next. Short chapters for a short story.
Your story is great! I love how you cliffhang. It made me want to wait for another chapter. Nice characters specially Yuuki and i love how unique your writing style.
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amazing story. eagerly waiting for next update. the plot of story is very interesting, unique, emotional. but pls dont end rishika with paul who hurted her for 10 years. we like fiery rishika.