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Good writing. Minor grammar mistakes, unnoticeable.The flow of the story is smooth.Solid world building so far. Slow yet not too slow.Promising story, and the author is proactive.Try it, maybe this is your cup of tea.
Okay, the second review of the day.This is my review after reading chapter 1, it wasn't because of the story not being interring enough, but rather I have no time.So, the plot is a gem, but left unploshed sue to negligence and well, authors lack of consciousness.I ain't sayinG Author isn't good enough or this book is trash. I personally liv d what I read in chapter 1. but as a reader, I should be cursing at the author. it gave me a hard time reading it. so, I was pissed but as a fellow writer I can understand.I would say, to check your para comments, I did as much as I could and try to fix them. don't just change themz review them and think it for yourself. I haven't read the enite story yet.The plot is good, but grammar isn't terrible, but a mess and made it harder to understand, making me reread paras simetimes thrice to comprehend the devine meaning hidden inside of them.So, focus on Style - I can let go of Grammar, but style should be goodGrammarcommas
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All I can honestly say is that I absolutely love this story. It has drama, it has a nice plot and back story it's even hilarious when it comes to Gabriel being tortured by Misha.