Is English not your first language? this is an unreadable mess. Run on sentences, no paragraphs, no proper quotations and separations for spoken words. I mean what I was able to read seemed like it might be good but the atrocious grammar ruins it completely.
The beginning of the story was quite intriguing. I'm already interested to know what would happen next with the characters and the plot of the story. This book has its unique potential. Overall, it is a nice read. However, I would suggest that you proofread your work. There are several issues with typo errors, grammar and some sentence structure. It is minimal compared to the quality of the stort, but still it would make your book more appealing.
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I really like this novel, but around chapter 160 the book turns from ‘the villainess and i her zombie’ to ‘the random side characters and their experiences that you dont care about’ and from then on you only get 2 chapters about the 2 mc. and other than that they dont even get mentioned.
is this the same as the one in wattpad? if it is then you shoul finish this story here since the one in wattpad is (in my opinion) incomplete. so PLEASE finish this!
This is considerably fast-paced and not really as slow as what you'd expect from a novel where the MC originally had no powers, but that's okay, the author knew what he was doing when he made this novel in first-person, perfect for a fast-paced novel.
I misunderstood the novel based on its name yes the MC breaks relations but 1 they do deserve it and most importantly he gives relations zero importance Money is more important I really liked the idea and plot even though there is only 20 chapters
Its a little bland for me(own opinion), It felt bland for me because of how many times I have read novels like this.I felt that when I stop reading ill stop forever type of thing that could easily get bored at.Also some part of the chapters I felt I have read before in another novel.
This website produces the largest volume of translated web novels I have found on the internet but with such a large volume of work comes the problem of extreme variety in quality. Laziness is the reason many novels end up lacking because either the novel itself takes shortcuts in favor of increased word count or the translator is only focused on quickly sending out the next chapter without carefully editing their work. Thsee issues make it all the more remarkable when something like this comes out. Laziness is the farthest thing from this content creator’s work ethic. Not only is the book itself a unique take on the returner and the vmmorpg genres but actively engages with the readers regularly and willingly reuploads their chapters losing out on many comments that boost their stats in order to maximize the quality of their work. Selfishly I want this writer to stay on this platform in order to consume their novels for free but this author clearly deserves a publishing house to make them a star. 10/10 flawless
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Even if this novel is not a masterpiece and mc is sometimes like a robot i enjoyed reading it. So if you are bored read this it's a complete novel with 1300 chapters.
stupid brother sister complex. getting tired with same brother sister plot.