Good start...
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The story is readable so far. The only issue is that the chapters are very, very short. It is better to combine several chapters and make it one.This looks like a teenage author who is also new on this platform.
awesome book to read . ...............................................
Man i like the writer and the store so far it's relatable ? and how he is too honest with us sometimes and now I'm writing random stuff to fill the 140 word Mark
Your work is excellent. I love the characters, the plot, and your writing style. I would definitely read this novel frequently, and it's great that there are many chapters and that I can take my time to enjoy this piece. :3
this work is so dope.i love the way you write .keep it up bby ?
Here to give you a sparkling review to help boost you up friend. Keep working, keep pumping out chapters. Looks like you are well on your way! Keep on rocking! And remember, a cool transformation is always a dope thing to do for a hero :)
hey wanna do swap review ( reading all the chapters approx 5 ,and adding up and giving honest , review . .. ?
the mc is so irritating to me i cant take it anymore im gonna drop it for now and maybe pick it back up few months laters for a second chance to me.. and i hate that he swears too much.
Today our school has meeting, so the time of study is just few hours.
He and his mighty power, split the world into two parts.