Twhis book is nice one i want more ipisode of this book.when is the releas of the next ipisode why its too slow.can you please post it quickly.
I like it, it has a cohesive plot for a smut story and good enough grammer, my only problem is that the plots can seem rushed at some points.
This is a nice fun read with a great sense of humor. Intriguing opening in third person narration with the team of Grimmers going about their business. Love the banter between the two siblings, some great comical stuff there. We then move on to meet our protagonist for the next few chapters and set up the story with first person narration, which is good because the protagonist sounds like a funny sort of character and his world views make for a lot of laughs. Storywise, I am certainly engrossed so far. And high marks are also in order from a technical standpoint as this story is very well written, adding further to the overall enjoyment factor. Five stars all the way. Hope the author keeps up the great work.
This novel is STILL even incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.
it's Ergen my favorite Author .. .but another book 1 chapter spit to 3 part? what happen I has met this spit 3 part. .. 4-5 book now..... Webnovel pay less to translator? story will not progress at all if you release part1 and part2 a day... no thank
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It is a good story for binge read... story development is slow ..when will author introduce alll...until now it is shown that sister come in mc room to get check in and mc distribut system and get rewards .. typical urban chinese story
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I find this fun and interesting. Not many books have the Main focus more in the dream aspect of things. It’s fun. Interesting. Refreshing. I am giving it a 5 star for the author to keep writing.
Entire Novel in short.. 1. MC becomes mighty.. earn billions.. still wears dirty mud laced clothes and ride a tri wheeled bike... Others look down on him.. mc gets angry.. calls big bosses with high class cars --> face slap2. Has a older gf.. sleeps with her.. goes around flirting with other girls like a *****.. guys gets jealous.. calls him peasant and poor sod.. mc shows his wealth --> faceslap.. guys call gangsters who mc had already beaten.. the rest is clear --> faceslap.. 3. Masters of the world faces supernatural enemies.. gets in trouble.. calls mc.. mc shows his power.. problem solved.. 4. Police are useless.. can't slove a single case because arrogant young masters are there.. calls mc.. he uses his connection.. case solved.. police 0 mc 1. Hail the mc.. 5. Doctors are incompetent trashes.. can't treat a disease.. mc appears.. disease goes.. 6. Arrogant.. competent and beautiful females.. becomes pussy infront of young masters.. mc appears... Another ***** added.. After all of this. Our mc is *pure*, *innocent*, *humble* #######PEASANT. Sometimes I wonder... Is world gonna come to an end when these kind of shits get chosen while other good ones get rejected.. or dropped ???
seems like a good read, somehow seemed a bit shallow though. however, if you just want to spend a little time on a feel goodish novel it might be for you