Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
A man with a great upbring for sure. No cultivator in the horizons of the many of Primoridal Voids has truly loved and integrated into their profession or craft. I’m tired of these spear wielding monkeys pretending to be Wukong. Perfect your weapon to the pinnacle to the point your intent is null where no one can see or feel it in the air. No scripture or technique? Simple keep practicing different thrusts and stabs. That is all I have to say.
Thank good storyline no idiot mc who shows off an spends so much damn time messing with idiots early in the story @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
This is my comment when I saw the author ruined his novel.-------------------------------------------This is where I drop. I can't believe you sprung this nonsensical poison on us 280 chapters in the story.Are you actually joking? He's willing to eradicate his birth family, the ones who raised and nurtured him. Just because they knew his secret.But for a bimbo who also knows his secret, who he's only known for a few years, he's willing to risk it all? Wasting resources to revive her? For what? Because he's human? I thought this was a novel about a demon general, not a romance fantasy about an anti-hero.You actually wasted my time. Why spring this on us 280 chapters in the novel. You could've been a decent author and let us know this would happen ahead of time.Somehow a ruthless dictator who's responsible for the deaths of millions in his past life, is willing to risk his shot at eternal life, just because of a bedwarmer. This is unimaginable levels of disgusting poison.
I think this novel looks great so far. It let's you know that there is going to be a great story to discover and I can't wait to see more chapters release. The premise of the story is intriguing and I want to see how it unfolds. The only issue is that there are slight grammar mistakes but those can easily be fixed with time, and you can still understand what the author is trying to say. I look forward to more of this book and I hope it'll be more interesting as it develops.
A fairly good story that hasn't been update in over month...................................................................................
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yes thank you for this story.I have been waiting for it continue for a long time now.is a nice story so please don't stop and keeping writing. I hope they pick it up☺
Has potential, many grammatical mistakes and the names aren't capitalizedIt's readable tho and the the issue with capitalization has been fixed in the latest chapter.
After chapter 20 the chapters are not in order. You have to jump around and that only works through chapter 32. After that I gave up trying to figure out what order they were in. I really enjoy everything about this novel but it’s not worth the effort trying to figure out what comes next.
first? well idk what to say really, would need to read the novel and review.not a big fan of the new system that doesn't give us 60 chapters. I think by then you definitely have a good idea if you want to keep reading or not. 40 chapters usually is when you are in the middle of the first cool climax...
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