What a great story!!!!. I really like this story.Leo isa calm cunning and shrewd and amazing person.I like him very much.I think he was an older and experienced man in his first life.It will help him his current time.By the way You are a talented writer.I am looking forward to read your story.I am glad you didn't give this up.Good luck Thanks.
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Hi! This is doris, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
The detailing about characters, background and of course the genesis ? is amazing it really makes you to read more unlike other system novels it doesn't follows the clichés and interesting quests keep popping. good job author
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I was hooked from the start, it was mysterious and scary at the same time, I like novels with little dark themes, and it was definitely it, keep it up ❤️❤️❤️❤️ can't wait for more chapters.
Marvelous world building. You can easily imagine just how the political structure of the world are being divided by 10 different World Leaders with each of them serving different purpose, having their own diversity, and unique traits that can affect the pace of the story and the future plot revolving around the MC. The story development is kind a bit slow, but it's alright for me I don't know for the others. Keep up the good work my dudes
Finally, some good people picked this novel :) To sum it up story is slow, no op mc... well there are too many good points actually, if you no longer feel exited with mainstream cn novel try this one. The only downside is 3ch/week schedule, but it's way better than nothing:) Ps: if you like wmw or revered insanity you will probably enjoy this one too.
I didn't read much of it, but 16 chapters should be enough for a review. Characters are too shallow, succubus servant comes and bites him out of nowhere, acts like she's in heat all the time but somehow shrinks back down acting 'submissive' I guess. Cuddling with another man in front of your so called loved one is pretty ntr in my opinion, hated it, in comments, author said thats because she is succubus and thats why. Well, that is not a good reason, considering the succubus in question was virgin if I didn't understand it wrong. After I saw couple of reviews, I wanted to read this, coincidentally 'limited free' today was this novel. It was not a good experience for me.
Bro please don't drop this... story it fire