"Sir. Sir, you there?"
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Too much jump in POV...perhaps a little explainin' in next ch...And big thanks ?? for the recent chapters
POV Change:???
"But-" The other stopped suddenly.
"My if you get any redder you may dry your wet clothes just from the heat of your body." Marra said with a smile on her face.
Agilegale's relatively far away position from capital made it cold just like the northern lands of continent, maybe even colder. So he had to run as fast as he could before his silver fur turned into crystals of ice. He passed through the 2 floored houses and wide commercial buildings. Some of them held caged beasts in front of their houses, grim creatures' snorting heard across the streets. No one complained, however, they were the best guardians for protecting against thievery. Maybe even against arson.
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( Incorrect, the remaining 2 levels to reach level ten are for you to solidify your minor realm powers and body so that you are not overloaded by the sudden power gained from reaching a major realm)
Jin still doesn't like this girl for some odd reason. His intuition doesn't buzz like that one time he nearly killed his sister by accident nor was his instinct telling him to be careful of this girl but he still doesn't like her. She's very kind. She gives her food away, her water, her blanket, her kindness. And worse of all, her stupidity. Her actions was causing a lot of the kids to not mature as they should. Even Rebecca look at Jenna like she's crazy sometimes when she doesn't eat her portion of the meal and give it to Vinna or Arise.
Chi turned to see her dragon golem with an armful of wild vegetables. There were young bamboo sprouts, wild spring onion like vegetables, wild mushrooms, and some dark leafy greens. It looked to be enough to make a meat stir fry for three people. Hopefully, the Emperor will deliver plenty of rice when the young prince comes.
Make add more kingdom building element and some more from the original but don't make them the same.