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this is like a white person tryna write a chinese wuxia/xianxia story. no matter how hard they try it cant beat the original. like theres former pill master, powerful cultivator, face slapping, son kicked out of the family. the writing is so iffy, its so forceful. rather read a shtty chinese webnovel than this, at least the authors know what their writing about
Had a great start! I keep checking back hoping for more chapters only to find cobwebs. Maybe one day, but I think it’s just wishful thinking on my part.
Well... not sports... not short stories... has GIGOLO on the title...Yep... won my votes... xDI do wish there were more fmcs but if the she is strong and has a nice temper i don't mind her lover being the mc...
hahjaja..this novel ive readed in chinese site. its so fking interesting..let me laught cant stop...vote this vote this vote this vote this vote this vote this
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Ok. This novel might be you first so I won't be critisising your writing..seriously ,though, it's fine putting none cannon transformations,but saying that freeza has trillions in power level and saying that the MC was shocked unconscious for a year while having millions in PL is just garbage bull****.FIX THE POWER LEVELS.Also I think that your progressing the novel too quick.had a nice "overpowered MC" idea at the start but it turned out sh*t
Considering that this is the first work of the author as he said so himself, this is pretty good. The chapters are long and he could definitely chop them up to two or three chapters to gain more leeway in writing it, just saying. There were dark scenes as well hidden in there so watch out for it.
As a big fan of horror, most horror novels and mangas has left me dissatisfied. This caught my eye while I was randomly scrolling through my suggestions, and from the first chapter, I sucked right in. I read chapter after chapter not wanting to stop. Sometimes I haven't even eaten breakfast, and when I'm finally giving my self a rest, lunch has already past?This is LITERALLY the only novel that I have this much interest in.Time flies fast when you're reading a good book!(novel)
Read to chapter 112. I came to it hoping for a slightly worse legendary mechanic. I felt disappointed. The writing is good, no errors or anything, and I think the story has some interesting things to it, but I can't stand the MC. In particular, his indecisiveness on hiding or showing his power. It also feels like the MC is wasting a lot of his time and throwing away his advantage. He also doesn't seem to use his knowledge from his previous life a lot.
I realy like Author's other work, and, at first, got realy into this one as well.But, after a few chapters, the MC got the briliant idea to dual wield two-handed weapons (Spears and glaives) and to stack multiple cultivation technics for the same level. This realy killed it for me...I mean, two isn't always better than one, especially so when talking about two-handed weapons.
Please more chapters