Average novel with a bland story and characters so far what really kills it for me is a few spots that feel like in the original that something else was written but in this translation it is just a blank area
Way, WAY too much world building.I don't need to know every details about every creatures, classes, damage formulas and the world as a whole that are taking over 3/4 of each the chapters which are often repeated in multiple chapters.Sorry, i really tried but it is making it unreadable for me.
Though I am not a fan of such novel, This was a good read. I am especially proud of this translator who took up this novel without the extra pay and delivered this to us just because he likes it, And I am sure this novel will not be dropped like the tens of other, Whose petty translators start dropping them just because they weren’t making them enough money. This is a passion project, Neither the trial novel slot nor the voting pool slot was taken. Please check it before going hysterical. Again Great respect for the translator, I wish he would have been the one to translate some of my fav novels like World of Deities or Lord of oasis etc.Now Regarding the novel, I disliked it at first because of knowing how all of the games will be copied, But the good thing about this one is, Later he also start developing his own games and also add extras to the copied ones. It’s a leisure face slapping novel. 5 star just because of the great Translator. You have my utmost respect.
The story is quite good, but there were too many cliches in the begging.also +rep for #NoHarem140 characters 140 characters 140 characters
For crying out loud can we get another translator? Reading it makes me tilted i mean there's a cultivation rank in there that so messed up that even other readers can come up with a better words for it.I even think this is MTL and QI just put it here to be published.
Thank you Atlas translations for finally giving to this,excellent novel,the translation quality and steady releases that it deserves,this novel is one of the best.
i personally do not recommend reading this novel to anyone but the mentally challenged,As reading this novel and managing to stay sane afterwards will be a miracle
So far i don't have any complaints.I am at 112 now aka latest chapter unlockable by fast pass.The Mc is not like wuxia protagonist. He understands how the world works and tries to use it to his advantage and takes advantage of the plot of the original story.I recommend this to you if you want a story where the VILLAIN (our protagonist) face slaps THE PROTAGONIST (aka the original protagonist). Overall the writing quality is good(which is surprising in webnovel).I hope the author REAPER will keep working hard on this novel and we will support unquestionably for that.
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“I’M NO LONGER A VIRGIN”The family was at the dining table. The little 10-year-old girl wasn't eating and had her nose in her plate….After a few moments, she said, “I’vesomething to tell you people”Silence around the table.“I’m no longer a virgin”, and she begins to cry.A long silence again.And then, the father angrily and screamed at his wife, “It’s your fault! Always dressed and made up like aprostitute!Do you think you are setting a good example for your daughter? You see now? That’s how problems arrive”The wife, in turn yelled at her husband:“What about you? Are you setting a good example? Wasting your salary on sluts who sometimes even accompany you to your doorstep! Are you setting a good example for your 10-year-old daughter?”The father continued“And her elder sister, that good-for-nothing, With her rasta man of a boyfriend, Who is always found with her in all the hotels. Do you believe she is setting a good example for her younger sister?”And the recriminations went on and on and on….The grandmother touches the shoulder of the little grand daughter to console her And asks her :“Well, my little girl, how did it happen?”And the little girl replies while stifling her sobs:"it’s the priest”The grandmother asked:“What do you mean, by ''it is the priest ?”The little girl said: “The priest has chosen another girl to be Virgin Mary in the Christmas play.I’m no longer playing the role of Virgin Mary again." Hmmm the price of impatience!!!!Even you the reader was much in a hurry to conclude and blamed the priest before the story ends.Morale of the story is that its natural to be shocked at the beginning. But learn to listen to the whole story before you react.Only then can you solve the issues thrown up by the story.Remember wrong actions can't be undone even with the highest apology!.....??Moral : ALWAYS LISTEN TO END BEFORE YOU REACT.A GOOD LISTENER IS WHAT WE NEED. BE ONE
The author hates Buddhists, typical communist behaviour.
Please can we have more of the update for the novel because it will be highly appreciatedif it continues for the novel has a good story line