Im at ch 1822. . and honestly. . Im tired. . Hahahahhahhahaha. . . 3yo genius children? I dont think their cute thooo. .
ITS REALLY GOOD OML
For the FPs!!![img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
The story was initially interesting, but it literally goes in a circle for at least 10-15 chapters with no real development. Then it skips weeks to months ahead with no background. There is no crucial plot just a story that continues to circle around and around. I wasted coins on this story.
shameless author here is asking you all to just read in your pace and tell me if there are mistakes or errors.
I am solo in writing this story but I'm having so much fun that I want it to be perfect for you all?
twisted dark nove, what more could I ask for [img=update]
Points to Ponder:
What was the story about?
-The story is about the journey of a young boy who goes through different trials and tribulations. He grows in strength, experience and personality while he makes new friends and enemies.
Who is the main character?
-Meng Qi
Is the MC likable?
-He is a funny guy. He often gets into trouble way over his head, but uses his wits and intelligence to survive. His dream is to be a cool and suave Young Master and to awe everyone with his charms. Unfortunately, he is often seen as a brute due to the martial arts skills he uses. Luckily he is starting to gain more cool skills to masquerade as a bishounen pretty boy haha.
Did you like the book?
-I like this novel very much. The fight scenes are intense. The lore and background is rich. The skill levels are well explained. The characters have depth, their actions will some times make you laugh or bring you tears.
If you could change something, what would it be?
-Some of the earlier chapters need editing & TLC because the grammar can be weird and the terms/jargons used are complicated. There should also be some Footnotes provided by the translation team.
Would you recommend this book to another person?
-Yes definitely!
What type of person would like this book?
-Anyone who loves reading martial arts or eastern fantasy novels would love it. Especially those who like a challenging novel with a complex lore and many martial arts.
Come on with the chapters too slow
love your stories. engaging, well written looking for the next...lycans unexpected alpha. is it out yet?
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Love this book, all the twists and turns leave you in suspense and wanting more.
Love this one