It's a really good story that follows the idea of jumping back in time. Even though it's a common novel idea, the author still manages to draw you into the world. The itemization and quests along with the fame system are well balanced and believable. The writing of the environment also paints a grand picture of the game in your mind.The only thing I would note is that it has a slow start to the story, taking around seven chapters before you even get into the time jump. So if you can stick around for that then you're in for a good ride!
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I really like the way the author describes the story. From this story, we can learn many life lessons. I'm waiting for the sequel, Thor!! Fighting!
This was an enjoyable read!
Some of the scenes hold solid humour, and the story seems to be developing rather quickly. The relationship between the two main characters and their home life was established quickly, which made their reactions to their circumstances further on realistic to the matter at hand. The writing could use some work. Oftentimes, it swaps from present to past tense, especially in descriptions and dialogue tags. This can be read over though, and the writing is easy to read. I like how quick the story is developing, and the system seems interesting as well. This book looks open to opportunity!
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I like the story development, the world is basic cultivation world, and not many chapters to decide if I like the characters or not but the MC seems pretty cool. The first wife is magnifique and the other love interests seem not too bad. Author just saying I hate annoying girls so if I drop it it's probably a personal preferences not because you did anything wrong. Authors on webnovel love to add annoying women that make 0 sense lol.
Hey author please release more chapters.
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The synopsis of the story is intriguing. The author's vision and world-building are great as well. The fighting and massacre scene was full of anticipation. Well, more could be done but the author had put in his effort—it is worth a try. Nice one...
I don't know how to feel about this story. I like the setting, the writing quality is much better than most fanfic, the update speed is awesome. But the MC is absolutely infuriating, it's like the author purposely make a MC with negative IQ just to tick off reader for fun. After clearing the first dungeon, he sell all the cores for money without strengthen himself. He has infinite mana yet he sell the summoning skill book( and some other skill books as well).... Fck, why the hell does he even sell skill books? Just learn everything and only sell the cores he doesn't need for money. He kept clearing dungeons multiple time and selling drops in bulk, yet he asked how did people discovered him..... Does the fcker think everyone has his IQ? On the bright side, he did learn from his mistake, but those are common sense, even a "normal" ten years old is suppose to know that. Thing might get better latter but currently I just can't stand this MC retardness.