I really love the chapter it was touching
Hello everyone! Just gonna pop this here, but I truly hope everyone gives this novel a chance. Join me on this journey of fleshing out this world and character, let me know what you think! I love any type of constructive criticism since I am still a fledging writer.
This is just another "China nambah one" novel. It's a waste of time to read it. It's even hard to understand why Webnovel even translates suck kind of novels.
A well written upcoming book with a nice storyline…looking forward to more chapters..
I don't know what to say, I am speechless. The MC here is a public road as anyone can walk all over him. And what does the MC does, he keeps his head down and then takes revenge in secret and then it repeats. I get why he does this but c'mon there is a limit to how much of coward one can be. I read the novel till 220 chapter and the character of the MC never changed. I read 220 chapters hoping he will be less of a slave to the FMC but no and I just cheaked the chapters near 900 and he is still the same.
this seems like this book would be an interesting readit has only just started and I'm still waiting for the story to actually begin but the intro has been funI ❤️ OP as it can be a fun concept if done right.
It's not the best story I've read even though I'm the author but it's interesting though I suppose . what do you think?
The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.
This is the second novel about vtuber that I ever found in Webnovel. Sooooooo, you have my gratitude. Gift you 5 stars......................
personally i feel that this novel has its own uniqueness to it. there are few books with this genre and the layout of the plot is well done. the characters are fleshed out and have personalities. the interactions between characters are smooth and have no feelings of rigidness of a script or forced convos to continue the plot.its a bit slow in terms of plot progression but it keeps itself paced. i would reccomend the novel for good leisure read. would i say its great?....maybe.....maybe. it has potential but I'll have to wait till ch.100 to decide that. (author, when you reach 100, do remind me to edit this review)all in all its solid with no plot holes or overly used cliches.
its mid~ -lots of loveFailure Management Class.....................................
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