Ex-pertiment 1Still waiting for the review to upload...Sir Puffy Mittens:
This is a great book. Probably best described as a coming of age in a world of cultivation. The path of cultivation is reminiscent of doulou dalu but everything else is unique. Besides how many cultivation novels copy others qi system.A book with detailed characters and realistic interactions. At times it can seem a bit slow but if it was faster based it would lose a lot of the detail and quality that makes it such a good book.
I see. So there will be misunderstandings as he is an emperor in disguise therefore the MC will be secretly hiding how big his d!ck will be?I'm down.
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The writing of the author suggests that he is a 30 year old vir*in who is using this book as a platform to release his se*ual fantasy thus destroying the story line. As seen by the first 40 chapters the book is more than 1/4th po*n
An absolute brilliant story, the world background is absolutely genius! It's really well written but I recommend you to have a strong heart... Its not a silly harem story with screaming agape girls ?.The characters are unique and mesmerizing, it's funny and so sad at the same times. There is a lot of struggles and you will feel hypnotized...One of my favorite story so far! Hope you will vote to get this story reaching the charts, it's truly a hidden masterpiece : a curse.
The characters are very one dimensional and the story overall reads like a grade school story. It would probably be suitable for young teens to read, but the story line moves so slowly that I’m not sure it could retain their attention. Most of the story reads like a summary of events: Character A did this, Character B did that. At best I can say this is a good framework for a story that needs more scene development and character depth
Amazing book the story writing is awesome and the whole plot is very good and the perfect I had a worried I prefer you to read new writer is on the way he might be the best
Pretty good story. Grammar could be improved though. Also, add some tags to your story. I am not able to vote with Stones to your story though
I thought it would be just the the same as the earlier ones, but it's different and unique. I really liked it a lot and hope it gets picked.
Finished reading this it’s a huge waste of time.It only goes upto chapter 200, it was intriguing at first then you start to notice the flaws in this work and when it start going into the aweakener nonsense is basically crap at that point.The ending also is crap.
Translation quality - it's good. A few typos here and there but meh.Stability of updates - well it's a trial read and not a chosen novel sooooostory development - Doesn't seem to have much of a story tbh. The power scaling sucks, there isn't really any end goal or drive. Not only that but the mc practically relies on borrowed power the entire novel.The mcs of the worlds he goes to suddenly have cliched 'halo effects' that make them immune to the mc trying to hurt them. For example the mc tried to have the mc of the 'edge of tomorrow' film get injured so he'd get a blood transfusion so the mc could proceed with his plan, but somehow some bs would always happen that stops this. The car flips over, the machinery breaks down, a gust of wind. It was all very forced.Not only that but the author never describes his process of becoming stronger in terms of stats. It seems he just trains by running around? He goes to different worlds gets missions and does stuff but from what's been stated it seems his main mission worlds only give him dimensional points to buy soul stones which brings us back to the whole borrowed power thing. He apparently can take 1 of the skills from the soul stone once it's used up but at the end of the day it's still borrowed power.Character design - I honestly can't remember anything that sticks out about any character and I've literally just stopped reading.World Background - The mc takes over the body of someone who is supposedly an exposed cultist. The mc deals with this pretty quickly and ends up joining the organisation that was hunting him down because they don't know he's the same person. We're quickly introduced to various countries and organisations that have no substance to them. It seems we have a camp of chaos for no other reason than they like chaos, a camp of order cos well humans like order, and a camp of edgy teens that want everyone to die for no other reason than they get it up for death. The world lacks substance and the power scaling is extremely bad.TLDR: - mc relies on borrowed power- poor world background (has no substance)- there's no goal or end game- the author skims over the worlds a lot it's very barebones- characters aren't memorable- cliched halo effectsP.S. People keep comparing it to custom made demon king but that's an insult to that novel.I don't think I'm missing anything from this tldr but if I did the rest of the review should speak for itself.