It happens to be 9:26 AM when I'm writing this. I realized I had 8 reviews and that I can write another review at 11:00 AM where I am and will have ten reviews. I'm giving myself 5 stars because it's faster, and it will also increase my rating. This story deserves a high rating because I worked on it! Every author feels the same way! Give us all 5 stars please! hahahaha! In an hour, I will have 10 reviews! Then the spell of 10 reviews will be complete and you can see my rating!
Proudly cynical, self-adoring perverted author's review here:Feast your eyes, Webnovel! This is what QUALITY writing looks like, and it's shamelessly being employed in order to tell a totally unplanned, totally nonsensical SMUT story about an 18 year old billionaire CEO being transformed into a large-breasted squirrel-girl hybrid.It's cynical. It's raunchy. It's highly sexually frustrated, and entirely sick of concealing these facts to try and appear "normal" around others...It's Cultivating Anthro CEO RPG Hero Harem Reincarnation in Another World—my magnum opus of FILTH, you NORMIE scum!
Writing quality: no glaring grammar issues or spelling mistakes;Stability of updates: no issues;Story development: inconsistent, one sentence person has an axe, in the next sentence it’s a sword and these inconsistencies are literally everywhere, boring revenge plot, it’s not even apparent at the start what his revenge is about;Character design: rather one-dimensional and plain;World background: inconsistent
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Could -RealmsExample: Like the Six Realms of Buddhism: REALMS Gods/Heaven, REALMS Asuras, REALMS Humans, REALMS Animals, REALM Shungry Ghosts, And REALMS Demon/Hell.-DimensionsExample: Parallel, Secular and Virtual Dimensions.-PlanetsExample: Multiuniverses or Thousands of Planets.There are also three Worlds-Mortal World-Celestial World-Immortal WorldAlien, Terminator, Predator, Titan, Monster, God, Asura, Human, Beast, Ghost, Devil, Angel, Elf, Dragon, Phoenix, Fox, Mermaid, Undead, Golem, Spirit, Dwarf, Orc, Giant, Goblin, Djinn, Gnome, Troll, Centaur, Slithereen, Deep One, Skaven, Cyborg, Transformers.Races that definitely exist and are differentEnergy The Chaos, The Nihility, The Infinite, The Divinity, The CosmicQI, MANA, SPIRIT, AURA, PRANA, ASTRAL, ELEMENTAL.BODY POWER, SPIRITUAL POWER, SOUL POWER MAGIC, MARTIAL ART, SKILL, TECHNIQUE, CULTIVATOR, MAGICIAN, SCI-FI, SYSTEM.LAW, DAO, AND, CULTIVATION
Good story. was really looking forward to it.Then CHINA happened. Only in China does spiritual power increase more than normal.MC has no qualms about killing Russians because they are 'whites' but for Chinese people, they are friends.Higher realms all Chinese.China not a simple country, but it's fine to pick fights with the other ones.In any case..... I am sure this won't be picked. However good the story is as a non-china person, this novel is just too bad to even try :V
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Among all the books we've translated so far, this one is different! It is easy-to-read and the author tells the story in a light, funny way. Yes, there's another OP protagonist in this book, but the exclusive idea is that the Martial Soul of the protagonist "sucks"! Come check it out!Fun Fact: the author is still releasing new chapters on a daily basis, and some of our translators are so obsessed by this book that they stay up late to binge-read the latest chapters.☺
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I first thought that it would be just *** and the story will lag, but surprisingly the story is more interesting and the plot holds itself, the *** stuff is secondary. Characters are well developed and even the tertiary characters are nicely portrayed which in turn seamlessly binds the story, plot and the characters.Thank you for writing this.
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I don't often write reviews, but I figured I should try for this one. This review was made as of chapter 76, so keep that in mind.Writing quality: 4.5/5 (Rounded to 5) The only real problems are the occasional mix up of Your/You're and Their/There, but it isn't too bad, and definitely happens less often than some other novels have em. There are occasional misspellings, but they aren't bad. Overall, it is easy to understand what is going on, and what the author meant to say.Stability of Updates: As of now, they are uploading pretty much daily, 5/5.Story Development 5/5: While it may be too early to say, so far it has gone nice, with the main character experiencing many roadblocks in the form of his own teammates, enemy teams, and outside of the game, which makes this story not only about Basketball but the goings-on outside the games and training, which I like personally.Character Design 5/5: As far as his team goes, everyone has a different personality, and that also extends to pretty much everyone else outside the court as well. Though I am pretty sure that eventually, the author will have to re-use some character types, since there is bound to be a lot of characters, both in court and off-court as the MC grows up, but that won't be too much of a problem. Especially when you consider 90% of the Chinese novels on this site re-use the same character type for every villain.World Background 5/5: The world thus far seems mostly like our own, and as he meets people who he recognizes from his past life, we start to get to learn more and more about the basketball scene from his past life, and we start to learn how it influences choices he has and will make.Overall I like the story personally, and the main complaint I have seen is how the MC is lacking in social situations, but when you consider that he has focused on Basketball for 20 years, and pretty much only got a job to stop his parents from worrying, it sorta makes sense that he wouldn't be too good at this stuff.