A threatening glow flared on his narrow, cunning, brown eyes. Lados froze on his track. The two men measured each other. Soldier and cook were of the same build, same height and towering postures, each two meters tall. One stood there unarmored, long hair waving, being tainted by the deadly smoke. The other, armed to the teeth, ancient weapon at hand, seemed able to take control of the surrounding catastrophe. Narrow eyes pierced through Lados' heart. He could feel them searching his soul, delving deeper, studying his existence. Suddenly, the measuring stopped. The sledgehammer twitched. Attuned to it, the soldier raised his arm, pointing to the north-western sky, where Lados thought he witnessed it turning crimson. Deep blue stones glowed in response. Thunder burst from the cloudy sky. Another tree caught on fire. This time, the fire perpetrator was known. The towering soldier drove his massive hammer to the ground, pounding it with all his might, blasting Lados away.
Vegeta nodded his head with an impressed stare, "So, these are all these world's techniques?"
I abolutely love this novel. Entertaining, fun and has infinite potential. No plotholes whatsoever, no annoying inconsistency. Original ideas(as much as it's possible) and loveable characters with actual personality. The collegues, family members are not just props but feel geniune humans. I give this novel my full aproval and spirit stones from now on
I found this novel really interesting. The MC got transported into other world as poor teenage which is illiterate and jobless. So we really follow MC journey to learn how to read, searching job, learning music, and hiddenly learning magic which is banned by church. I think it is kinda like "the dark king" where mc join magic group instead of alchemy. Other than the good plot, the mc is also likeable as he is hardworking and caring to his friend and family.
So far very good, the writing quality is great, no grammar mistakes either. I like that the MC is an actual newborn and not a reincarnated human too. Please explore the wild and prideful nature of a true-born apex predator.
hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
This novel fills me with mixed feelings. I enjoy the plot and the story development. I like the main character(*most of the time) as he is smart and can have things done when needed, and you want to follow his tale and see how he faces his challenges and overcomes them.Now, for the bad part.1- Writing quality: Poor, really poor. Constant conjugation errors in every possible way you can imagine. Poor spelling. Poor dialogues; sometimes we don't even know who is talking or whom is being talked to. Some sentences just don't make sense, because of how it is structured.2- Character Design: Decent at best. Besides the MC there is only one other character that really pops out (due to spoilers won't say his name).3- Female lead: Horrible character. Begins the novel as a spoiled little girl and remains as such. Keeps complaining on how the MC behaves, even though she knows he is an introvert and never had any friends previous to the "Fall". She doesn't even acknowledge her feelings for the MC, but keeps on getting jealous and lashing out on the MC, Plus she doesn't trust him to make the right decisions, and second guesses him every chance she has. 4- Side chapters - Too many chapters about non interesting characters, trying to better describe the situation, but failing miserably. On many occasions the MC's plot is moving, and then we have a chapter about side characters. Also, there is little connection in between the chapters, plus the timeline is really broken. We don't know how to fit such chapters into the story.5 - Time travel - Many chapters occur in the future, or are about memories form the future, etc, etc (you know how annoying time travel is), but they are not explained as such. when we realize they are form a different timeline we are half way into the chapter.6 - Allusions - Too many things taken from other sources, such as DC, Norse mythology, Greek mythology, etc. And sometimes the author simply copy and paste them. If you pay attention you will see that the MC relationship with his sworn brother Loki, is the same with Odin and the original Loki from the Norse mythology. Also, powers copied from DC that have nothing to do with the cultivation system in the novel.This is just my two cents. I can live with the grammar errors and bad spelling. I can live with copying things from other sources, since the plot overall is still good. But I just can't stand the Female Lead b*tch. It annoys the hell out of me and I just wish she would die.
This was the first truly great web novel that I ever read. An essential must-read for veterans and newcomers alike. And at the end if it all, it will leave you remembering the name Linley Baruch.5/5
well, what can i say?a story with massive potential and a very good world setting wasted in the hands of the author. i just wish he would stop posting fillers that compose almost 50% of the updates, i mean, for god's sake!can you actually focus like 99% on the MC? and maybe give other characters more depth. also, the development of the story needs to be intriguing, not this much forced.ah yes, we know that you are indonesian and proud. Please stop that!! enough! be more creative with names and stop with the nationalism !! it is just hurting.btw i read up to 350 chapters, but it's hurting me to continue further.
well, what can i say?a story with massive potential and a very good world setting wasted in the hands of the author. i just wish he would stop posting fillers that compose almost 50% of the updates, i mean, for god's sake!can you actually focus like 99% on the MC? and maybe give other characters more depth. also, the development of the story needs to be intriguing, not this much forced.ah yes, we know that you are indonesian and proud. Please stop that!! enough! be more creative with names and stop with the nationalism !! it is just hurting.btw i read up to 350 chapters, but it's hurting me to continue further.
So far so nothing to complain about! The Characters are getting slowly introduced with different kinds of personalities. I hope this doesn't turn into a harem