"How can you say a story is logical?To make your story more logical there are two criteria that you need to meet: Consistency and Coherency. Consistent: Your story must follow its own rules and norms, and it must not contradict itself."
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This novel takes quite an interesting take on the cultivation world, with there being and organisation to manage cultivators and the complicated relationship between the organisation and the sects/families.The cases that were presented atleast in the free chapters were quite different from each othere represting the range this novel may offer. The plot of the cases seem interesting and the analysis and evaluation at the end of the first case was just awesome. And not all cases seem to be deep and schematic, some were just simple misunderstanding and a little funny, which provided a bit of comic relief.The main character and the supporting characters are defined well enough that it wouldn't be hard to enjoy them apart from each other. MC is quite an oddball though, more in a funny way and surprisingly enough very stern when needed whithout it being an out of character thing for him.I really would suggest reading till the end of the first case, and his evaluations. After that you can decide whether to continue. I don't usually write reviews but it seemed like a good novel and lacked reviews, so here I am.And yeah, the writing was quite detailed and grammar... everything written by a human seems heavenly to me after geeting deep into mtl and raws so idk about that. That's all. Have a nice day.
So far the story has done well can't wait for the author to start explaining more about the world . Overall this is a good read I highly recommend it
Other than Bu Cai being way too talented for a cannon fodder(i get it strong foundation and that ridicilous herb played a very important part)but Chang Wu is high grade original Bu Cai is mid grade then its way too much for him to be king grade even top grade is doubtful but still belieavable.
I Like this novel it really good ? but the written ✍ of the words are not really good like Empress Leng in some chapters you wrote Emperor Leng you make me confused ? in your address of some people but i like this novel alot it nice ? ???
Quite a good novel..I like it..The plot & character development not rushed, mc is not too overpowered..Hope to see new chapters soon..Good job to the author
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well ... at this point i can with no guilt say i rather read some chinese bs thats been translated with google translate then this story ... since machinetranslation is atleast not giving me a headache
This is were it was originally posted https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/rwby-the-gamer-the-games-we-play.306381/Lord-panda stole this from Ryuugi, he is not the writer.
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