My first read in Web Novel. It bounded me so good that all I can say is, 'I'll never forget it'. ^_^
It's a greats story so far, I'm on chapter 6 so I don't really know what up to come on the future chapters when I get there. Gonna be a little surprised :) but I like it so keep up good work!
Though it is short, it is a very good wish fulfillment story for every Indian. I am very proud to see our online literature booming. I wish many such indian novels continue to come out. I wish all such authors my best wishes. I prefer 'reborn as kings' types but only 2 such novels have been written and that too in vijaynagara empire, so I encourage writers to imagine and create these types of novels. Plus I think Ramayana and Mahavarata can also be adapted into novels and 'reborn' into these to spread our hindu religious ideas similar to Chinese and their prehistoric civilisation, we can also build this different world from our myths. Maybe even spiritual recovery, apocalypse, smut and other types.
Is it insane that I want this story to update faster?!?!? Can it be updated faster? Like let’s say 10 chapters a day, instead of in a week??? I know it’s outrageous to ask but it’s that GOOD!!!
from start to finish for me the story is constant and develops little by little it's a good quality story.
This is a very intriguing book I must say . The ability of the writer to carefully explain every single details must be commended . I can't wait to continue from where I stopped
"Absolutely loved this book! The story pulls you in right away, and the characters feel so real. Really liked this! Definitely worth the read – keep up the great work!"But can you update the chapters Faster ?
Truly a captivating story. Your story is far mysterious, which makes me curious. There's this secret organization and inheritance stuff, it will catch the interest of the cultivation reader's interest.
I am still reading this book but so far i am starting to like it more and more. I am looking forward to see how this story going to end. I will definitely recommend you to try it.
Interesting world building with a ruthless MC. Looking forward to more chapters.
"Ku ku ku, well then Master."
"Me? Working under you" Souta said as he pointed at his nose.