the chapters in which his body is taken, are annoying...
This is absolutely very interesting. I will keep giving my time to read this absolute intriguing story. The fluency, plot organization and the captivating scenes got me reading. This is amazing and will recommend it to everyone!
Obligatory self review. the novel is exactly as advertised in the synopsis. it's written well; read and enjoy it.
reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.
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I, the great Siros had blessed you with a 5 star review.Be honored.............………….................................................................
I read the first 130 chapters. But I have to give up. The premise was great. The first 20 chapters was good. But then it went more slice of life style and in one case took 12 chapters to advance 3 hours in the book. When I found my self scrolling through the chapter hoping for an interesting bit I realized there was other stories I could be reading. This story is great if you like slice of life and knowing what the side characters are doing day to day. But I came for the duplicating system.
It's actually very interesting. There's a lot of concepts and ideas going around. I personally liked how they both cheated on each other than after a moment of pride, they confessed. I also really like the poem. You should do more of that. But please use paragraphs to make it easier for the reader to read. It looks disheartening, so probably a lot of people wouldn't give it a chance because of how gigantic the paragraphs look.
It's has hooked me from the first chapter hope the author eill continue to wrote this story but i think its abandoned :( ….................
Even it's_ just_ one_ chapter but I think it would be exciting and interesting ?? I_ will _waiting _for_ more _and_ I_ will_ be_ your_ fan
story is great and the idea is fun. but writing quality? sh*t. sentences (most of them) dont make sense which is regretful. i liked the story .will add it to my library tho. hopefully it gets fixed.
Starting was good and I expected muck from this novel But later part is all messed up...wrong pairing and love stuff to bad.....can't read more than this chapters...