Pretty great stuff.. I really enjoyed the different mc. He is very different from a the generic and stupid MCs that always escapes only because of some power up or something at the right time.. keep up the good work.
the novel is beautifully written. characters are also portrayed amazingly! and the plot is sure magnificent! it's such a great book! good job, author! for creating this masterpiece!
This story isn’t anything amazing, but I found it entertaining. There’s a lot of action as the MC is very proactive, nothing like the low-key MCs. One of the other reviews was strangely fixated on the girl next door, who was literally only in three chapters before she’s taken to a safe location by her dad and disappears from the story. She plays a very small part in the few chapters she’s in and there’s nothing inappropriate in them at all. Her role is basically just to highlight the effects of the spiritual awakening on even just kids. The other reviewer just seems to have a dirty mind bent on finding things that aren’t there. ?One complaint I do have is the system doesn’t really seem to be an AFK system? It seems to activate every 12 hours regardless of what he’s doing. Even when he’s fighting in the wilderness for days, it activates every 12 hours without fail.
really interesting book, the story development is really good , you should probably Nerf him a little the mc as a x10 exp bonus(or remove this) and even then is 2 levels higher than the second placehope you continue writting
this isnt a bad novel its just not that good.the grammar and the world background are all fine but the mc is a pushover with a hero complex, the story is badly paced. im at chapter 50 and he has yet to practice his skills, his understanding of the situation is severely limited considering that he has plenty of information sources around, his choices when it comes to abilities is quite poor. in a sense you could say he is fairly incompetent while receiving quite a few advantages(gold core, family background).he spends more time on his relationships then actually optimizing his ability to survive during this apocalypse.50 chapters and i believe 3 days have passed from the beginning of the story. for this novel to complete at the current pacing we are looking at thousands of chapters and the author will definetly not finish that kind of task. it is simply too ambitious. its quite a frustrating read, if that doesnt put you off then you can give this novel a try.
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As a fan of MMORPG novel, i am more or less biased toward this novel.As of now there are only 15 not much can be said.One thing to note is MC is OP right now. Also pace of this novel is very very fast so it gives little time to get attached to the characters and this world.NOTE: this review is only up to 15 chapters.
It's pretty dang good. I highly recommend it! (I would give it my sticker of approval but maybe I'll just hold off on it...)*********************
First of all, nolvel's idea is very good. And quite creative. But I only read 30 chapters. And I was frustrated with every chapter.This author has serious problems. First, the game system is completely broken. The character attributes and stats don't make sense, with numerous erroneous mathematical and statistical calculations, the game rules are weird, and some are just there for plot armor. It's like the author has no idea how an MMORPG works.The protagonist is low level, but is doing a quest that has not been released and only level 500 and above should complete. It seems like a bug But fortunately the game's ADM helps the protagonist in that quest that should be impossible to complete. What kind of game is this?Protagonist is naive and makes countless stupid decisions, but fortunately he is lucky and plot armor always saves him. ?I won't even mention the thousands of grammatical errors and typos. Apparently he didn't edit his own work.Compared to other quality novels, this is mediocre at best.
1 star for "slow release"...I'll wait and read it about 3 years later...And rewrite my review after that..........................................................................................
This novel delivers all the xianxia tropes, underestimated MC, young masters and so on, if it's your thing, rejoice. I used to like, but after 3 novels, it gets tough and repetitive.Seriously, I'm hoping to find a xianxia novel with a ground breaking system - I'm not talking about system novels - where the development doesn't sound like a bunch of nonsense or emptv words.I'm saying this after (re)reading the Mistborn series, where alomancy is such a ingenious magic system.