I do believe I've stumbled upon a hidden gem. the other reviews basically say everything, all imma say is that it's really good
I've read countless stories in this app but few kept me this hooked. It is amazing , the world building althought boring it makes everything make sense after reading ,and every paragraph made me imagine dreadful images, in my head that creeped me for a while. Nice work!
Everything is so perfect, reminding me of the emotions I felt when I first started reading novels. It's truly wonderful.A truly great book, absolutely not to be missed. My friend, you deserve this praise.
Shameless 5 star rating for my baby. I hope you guys have fun reading it, you can ask me any question under this review!⬇️
This is my personal opinion so don't take offense in any way.The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.The world background seems to be normal world around 2013.It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.
I enjoy the pace at which the story is going. The novel is intriguing and full of suspense which makes you want to read the next chapter. The author is really talented. Can't wait for the author to release the next chapterGood job author ?
Kenji turned his head.
"Eh ...." Writerz looks confuse as i expected.
After the news was over, I immediately continued my footsteps to the room.
" Hello! Can you tell me who is responsible for this shipyard? I want to buy a strong ship"
"We do not know, but his story did not seem to be a lie."
*blink* //system notification rang.