This story moves crazy slow. The lack of progress and constant POV switches to fairly unimportant characters is getting really tiring. Dialogue is also used or exposition at least half the time, and it makes everyone sound fake.Oh, and like so many of these types of stories, the MC knows literally everything for essentially no reason. This "super intelligent" MC got killed in a completely avoidable way and lucked into getting revived at the start. It's not a great character.Decently entertaining story, but not good writing.
To those afraid of the MC forgiving the ex-wife after reading the description, you can be somewhat at rest. The transmigrator feels a strong need to protect her family, but no feelings towards her (at least for now). However, this is really unimportant. The MC gains power as if drinking water and in less than a week has more power than the entire city's guardian. He also taught his system-given technique to someone else he barely met because of well.... some reason? I'd suggest you skip this nonsense.
I really love this novel I can't more chapters update and I can't wait to see the mc became stronger and I also like the mc and the system arguing
love the story and characters .................... ............................................................................................
character is too emotional for my taste,got up to chap 79 and thought that he'll reflect on his past and calm down and says so but his actions speak louder the his words ironically.
The story is good... I like how you write their emotions because you can see that... They are like true people...Keep up the good work!!!??
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After purchasing most of the chapters, I decided to finally write a review. Honestly, this book is just awesome. The characters are well organized, well put. And the storyline is far more intriguing than most books here. The author is really talented. Read this book, you won't be disappointed. Honestly, I even feel like purchasing the chapters all over again. Yes that's how much interesting this book is. I won't even mind that I would be wasting my coins ?
This story was just too boring, couldn’t make it past chapter 28, let me know if it gets better later but currently I couldn’t get into it.(Better = little sister dead/no longer mentioned; Main characters EQ/IQ is a lot higher; the fights are smarter than standing round a corner and punching a line of monsters that come through one at a time and finally that the worlds setting is shown, e.g. the parents job is explained, currently the story gives no details in this regard, they could be making and selling board games but that wouldn’t fit the setting.)The characters are stupid and annoying.I can’t tell what annoys me more, the main character or the little ‘sister’ the top 4 mentioned characters are the main character the ‘sister’ and the parents all of which I currently can’t stand.The only story development is the main character gets stronger and the sister can no longer bully him physically so she must do it in other ways while he enjoys every bit of it. Maybe the story will develop when he goes to another planet but I doubt it, it will probably feel the exact same no matter the planet, just with different monsters on it.The world background is ludicrous, and all I know so far is that they can travel anywhere in space and have met many other races which are either good or bad, bad being insect monsters and other ugly things while the good races are the elves(only race mentioned in passing), humans are apparently one of if not the weakest race and only survived with the help of the elves yet I have only seen human so far and other bad races through the vr game he played, unless they’re all mixed raced half elves now, don’t know because the story hasn’t gone into any detail about this.Bad/10
Well after reading it idk how this story gets 5* rating but everyone have different opinion . The mc of the story is one the most arrogant mc I have seen and know he doesn't have the strength to be that arrogant. Just because he somehow becomes owner of the bank of universe his ego started to infalte that much that if you don't agree with him or offend him you die . You have two options either do what he says or you die.I just couldn't stand his behavior in the story.
Clean and descriptive story telling. Cohesive sentences that flow super easily and compelling characters that give me a reason to be invested in the story. Translators and editors are really doing God's work by breaking the language barriers to great art.