I'm enjoying the story so far. The fight scenes are well written and enjoyable. The MC isn't OP and actually fights intelligently. I'm excited to see how the story develops in the future.
Writing Quality: GoodStability of Updates: OngoingStory Development: AverageCharacter Design: BadWorld Background: Goodiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
So ill start with the postives and ill work into the things i think need workYou have a good system style for the system genre i like the style of rapid growth with small bonuses collected from multiple worlds styleI love your world building so far you could probably be a very talented DM for dungeons and dragons and i respect the quality Your male characters overwhelmingly are well written and varied even the assholeish Second heroCons- mostly just to deal with the AMOUNT of harem girls you seem to have planned its overwhelming and itll be impossible to even remeber their names i think if you are seriously planning for 60 girlsAnd this brings up the other topics even the “main Wife” vibe character just screams generic harem fodder your female characters need some variance because even the stealth girl in the second world i literally saw the begrudging attraction first chapter after their meeting i can accept fate makes these girls fall for protagonist but it needs some more finesse to not just have the worst self fulfillment fanfic vibe
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hey can anybody give me the raw link of the novel???????????????????????????????????????????????????
It's just about MC being a side character and getting lottery rewards for successfully completing missions by helping others. The grammar is half decent like 5/10 there's mistakes here and there. The translation is garbage and misleads alot of information. In any case it's a good read to waste time I just wish the translating was better written.
Sad to see that the HDE is ended prematurely due to personal matter. Still, I like this author's writing style. It is suitable to my taste, perhaps due to me being a Malaysian too. Story wise, good start. Author made his MC start with being crippled as he went through series of confident set back to cultivate again. I hope the plot would get mature faster seeing that MC is in fact an expert and the mentor of a supreme emperor.I'm also looking forward for MC love interest, because you did not went further down the emotional road in your stories before. The fact there's some little thoughts related to xiao-ke and his grandfather made me notice authors effort in putting more effort in dialog and relationship into his story.cultivation wise, it wasn't very deeply introduce yet. I am still wondering how the story will goes from the flesh - bone - spiritual root layer. But at the same time, author hinted that there's the rumors of Pericelestial after Precelestial, so I guess that's gonna be where Jindan stage come.Overall, good start, I would say. As long author willing to keep the story goes and interesting, I'll follow without regret. it was a great experience so far since The Jade Realm, Uncle Store in Apoc, and Heavenly Dungeon Exploration.
It’s A really good read thus far im just hoping that something turns around with the mc and his disciples. I feel really bad for them (even though they’re Progressing in their cultication). It’s Mostly just because of the system. Like all in all it seems like he’d be a really good teacher even though he’s bullpooping it, it’s Just that because he’s Turning his students into geniuses It’s Screwing him over and he’s Getting angry about it. Idk I just hope that part of the story changes I guess. All in all a good read and I hope it updates soon
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
more..chapters..please.......
This has really great potential. So far the plot is intriguing, the characters are well thought out, and each chapter has good content and is not just fillers. Looking forward to more of the novel and hopefully we'll have a steadier updates/more chapters released.