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The story is okay, the characters are mediocre, the world building is good, and the technical writing skill is above average with few mistakes (mostly homonym errors). As far as updating stability is concerned, I have no idea since I’m writing this review with a ton of chapters left before I catch up to current when it becomes apparent. One major negative is that - at least as of chapter 75 - the author repeats the last few hundred words of one chapter at the beginning of the next. I’d say about a fifth of each chapter is pasted in from the chapter before it, which inflates the word count and, by extension, the cost in coins (or fast passes) to unlock them.
The novel has been great so far after the grammatical errors are fixed.The storytelling has been abazing since it gives of sort of a cosmic horror vibe where the mc faces something inevitable and tries to fight it.
The first chapters are great, then it becomes EXTREMELY repetetive to the degree that you are wondering when its gona continue the story or if you are having early onset dementia. nuff said.
Dropped within first 15 chapters. MC is blackmailed by a person saying he is from A terrorist grouping and will turn him in if he doesn’t follow his commands. The thing is MC is not so why would he just go along with it.An example would be a random person on the street walks up too you and says your a terrorist give me all your money or I will report you. Are you just going to give it too him? No you tell him to F off.
Shameless Author Review with some info:This novel had over 200k views and many readers before I took it off of WN. However, due to the demand for it, I have decided to not only reupload the 90 or so chapters when it was originally taken down, but also to upload the new 30+ chapters as well. This novel will be on temporary hiatus, since my other novel Golden Dragon Merchant Group will be taking priority. However, if there is enough support for this novel, I will take it off of hiatus and will try to make sure to upload 1 chapter daily moving forward.-OmniFrog
Standard reincarnation litrpg, first two volumes are on Amazon, I would recommend you read them. The author can be a little slow to post chapters but other then that great book.
SUCH AN AMAZING BOOK!!!! Exactly what i was looking and it’s update schedule is amazing ? it really deserves more exposure cause i want more books like this one!
In what world is plagiarism okay? Quit making up reasons to claim other people's content under your own name and try to wring some ideas out of that thing you call a brain.
this book is so underrated also PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
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Wow... Great Novel It's Mature and Entertaining, Thanks to the Writer,I didn't waste my time Reading it,Such Novels like this will Increase the rate of People Using this App or Site,I wish to rate more than 100stars If Only I could ?,I just wish the Novel should Continue