very bad traduction, at least in the first chapters, names change, genders change, and some sentences don't make sense. had to stop reading because i had to stop and try to guess what the actual meaning was.
Hmmm . Vol2 is better than vol 1 though there are more boring moments and more face slapping
but... but it it have a high rating of fou 4.3!
I hope.. It can soothe my tired mind.. Mate
Whats his name???
One of the mc's major problem is being dense, is it because he haven't seen anyone besides A, Rain, and L that he is dense?
Sadly no. Webnovel, who were translating this, just got the rights to translate the Volume 1. For whatever reason, they never got the rights to continue the translation for Volume 2 and beyond. Could be because the novel did not do good, or some other reason.
But whatever the reason, Webnovel just marked it as completed and never renewed, so you won't find any translations for this novel anywhere, except for the MTL sites.
Well unless maybe some other scanslation group translates it. But due to the fear of DMCA, i don't think any would.
This is a relaxed story but it's not really to my taste. It's pretty much just the typical Japanese isekai MC except there's no harem, and he's not as OP. As another reader said in their review, it's kinda childish. I think it would've been better off if the MC was never an adult in the first place because he can't seem to determine whether he wants to behave like an adult or like a child. Even if he's physically 12, it doesn't make any sense for him to act like that considering he's a grown man on the inside, and also the experiences he's been through. Like he grew up in an abusive home, was married for a period of time, lost his wife in an accident, died a couple years after after being shot. With all these experiences, the personality he portrays doesn't make sense. Also, I don't get why the MC wished to be sent to a place far away from humanity when he isekaied but then the moment he came across humans who were a bit nice to him, he didn't hesitate to become their magical sugar-daddy. That aside, the grammar is really good and I didn't come across any errors that made reading difficult. I just couldn't get into the story. Goodluck with your writing, author.
Wow, amazing piece author, really loved the way you describe your characters. I love the plot, can't wait to read more of your work. Good job
This is amazing! Could be a light novel even, though the story is good on the inside the cover needs work, the kind of fonts you have i mean the artwork isn't the issue, but that all aside this book is a 10/10
LitRPG and Cultivation tropes go to war in this stylish, action-packed tale of heroics influenced by eastern fantasy progression stories but still manages to make itself stand out and be its own thing.
The writing is excellent, the characters don't feel flat -- with a very driven protagonist to boot -- and the world-building's interesting enough to keep you wanting to turn the page.
I highly recommend this to my fellow readers, especially those looking for more cultivation!