I AM SORRY i am not a fan of NTR I mean I know there's not proper NTR here but i don't like even a hint of it in my reading preference and i don't mean it only from a male character liking pov but also if it's female main character based as I have little psychopathic tendency i like when even if mc does found out then he make her life miserable instantly and not just play with her games. I mean like what's stopping me from shooting a 7mm in both of there's body on my own property. i am rich, just make them vanish from the world i Mean like this World doesn't have mana or ki,qi or any supernatural element to save her or him from me I mean death serve all well and what is there that money can't solve. And don't take me seriously that's how I am. So sorry if it hurts somebody.
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to be honest, has high potential, but a lot of wording mistakes along with number mistakes that pull you out of wanting to continue reading. the kids seem to be way more mature than they should be at the described ages. and alot of other small problems and consistency issues.
I'm hooked.This LN reads like a book from one of my favorite genres : Intrigue. I'm relatively new to the artistic media trinity that is Light Novel/Manga/Anime, having begun in earnest about 3 years ago. And I have become VERY invested in this particular story. I was first introduced to it by means of the anime series. My jaw dropped at the end of the final episode of season 1.All throughout, we, the viewers, were allowed to hear Ayanakoji's inner monolgue. We were freely invited to see how the wheels in his head turned. He was enigmatic, which, in turn, made him magnetic. We heard his mental notes : "Interesting
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I'm the first review. The overall story is five stars. The plot is a bit generic with the portals and everything. I'd recommend giving it a shot.
This Story is amazing and Author is doing an amazing job..............................................................................................................................
What makes this novel great in my opinions is the relationsship between the senior and junior. She obviously cares so much for him because of the life she lived prior to reincarnating and he's OP now because of the system but I don't know is he is the same person just w/o the system in her memories.
Great story so far! The author does a fantastic job of setting up the world and characters. I love the whole concept even though it’s another VR story. The idea feels fresh and new. Keep up the great work Anji-sama! Can’t wait to see where our leading Heroine ends up!
I enjoyed reading this book, it keeps the readers Reading. my only problem is with the grammar. I look forward to reading future chapter that you put out. Have a nice day author San ?
I like the world so far as though it contains a few cliche elements it is combined in a way and with new ideas that make for an interesting setting and is probably the novel's strongest point.The characters so far have been pretty interesting though outside of a few core characters that are pretty interesting the side characters could be helped by being more distinct.So far the story is good. I wouldn't say amazing as hasn't gone anywhere deep so far, but good enough to keep me interested in how it will continue with some romance and actions. I would like to get some more intrigue and discovery related to MC, his ancestor etc blended with some story progression to elevate the story to a higher level.Now as for the only major downside is the writing quality. I suspect this is a translation rather than original work in English and pronouns are just an absolute mess. No he just him/her get messed up, but even those get messed up with I not infrequently which is a whole other level beyond even what I'm used to from rushed translations. It is even to the point where it can be distracting as I have to re-read paragraphs to figure out which pronouns were meant to be used to understand what the paragraph was supposed to mean.
Nice novel. Nice writing quality and story development. Character design needs a bit more work. We need to know a bit more about the other characters AKA his roommates. World Background is overused so I gave you a 3. Very nice novel though. You don't come across this types of novel very often.