This story was so incredible. I've enjoyed reading it chapter by chapter. It hooked me instantly with its awesome book title. I will surely share this to my friends and I'm sure that they will love it too as I do.
Great novel it has you by the edge of my seat. I wait for all the new chapters it has a great plot. Ever week I check for a new chapter. Great novel
Seems you you were originally a prototype game fan , but you actually added to the idea an original twist that makes predicting the story very hard , and that makes it really an interesting read
This book while still in the early stages (12 chapter at this time) has incredible potential. We haven’t even seen much of the MC yet and I’m already extremly excited about this novel. I have read the others other work and am expecting great things from this novel as well and so far it looks like it will deliver. The story seems incredibly interesting, all the elements are added in good amounts without any being excessive. There are a little slips with the update stability however this is just because it’s in the early stages and its only ever one day at a time. The early chapters also do a great job at setting the pace for the rest of the story and already have some great world building. Would definetly reccomend giving this book a try!
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The only major complaint I have is the translation quality specifically random missing words. Having all the words is kind of important...Otherwise, it is somewhat similar to the Legendary Mechanic, but with a magic focus so far. Looks like there is a decent number of chapters already out from looking at the raw.
The story has a decent premise but is totally destroyed by unbelievable details.Author please slow down. Take your time. There is no need to rush. The numbers used are impossible to believe. For example, the idea that only one person would spawn in a particular village out of 6 in the most popular game of its time is...hard to swallow? The MC completes one relatively easy quest (done in under 30 seconds) to gain...about 5+ game changing and completely different rewards. The entire world map is explored (except locked zones) by day 2 making this game incredibly small. I could go on but I think you get the point. There might be a real gem of a novel here as the basic premise is good. However, I'll never know as all of the details are just so jarringly wrong that I am unable to keep reading this. Author please consider finding an editor to help pick up on details like I mentioned as well as the frequent issues with grammar, especially punctuation.
this is the story of a clever idiot.yup very very clever IDIOT.and he is also lucky goddesses most favorite that she always farts on his face when required.the story goes like this till now.the mc is very clever but he chooses to have a cute pet that helped him(which he got as a reward) than a strong pet even when he can die any seacond and he also meets random women(no matter who they are just being women is enough) and the women will get into trouble that can never be solved by MC and then MC will again become totally brainless at that moment and be like i will rather die for this random women i just met than leave her and then the lucky goddess is like "oh nooo! the brainless saviour of women is dying" and she will fart on his face which solves his problems and MC wins.most ridiculous story i read.if the story had even a little bit of common sense this idiot would definitely die many times in the beginning itself. dont read this if you dont want to waste your time on the story of another one of those lucky bastards
Your details are impeccable and your story line is great. You have a true talent for writing ; I look forward to reading more of your novels. I have thoroughly enjoyed your book. ❤️❤️❤️
believe me this is a great book. start was meh, but later it speed up and become one of my fav for now on WNif you like evil mc, then this is for people like us. give it a try
Really very good, thanks my day today, as a writer I have to admit my inferiority, his writing, lightness and natureness make me wonder and I love this MC that cultivates other MC from the bottom of my heart.