i like it when the ml is too obsessed and the fl is too shy...for now it is enemies ..i can't wait for the lovers part.
This is the most unique story i have read in the webnovel so far (except Ri or Lotm etc.), mad respect to the author for writing this, even imagining writing this made my headache from the amount of creativity though the characters could have more life or more expressed emotion, but hey they're in the cultivation world people probably wont be so expressive after a thousand years of living. Enjoyed it so much that I read through it in one day haha
I am 50/50 on the whole story , will wait on the update
If you hate yourself just a little bit, this book is absolutely perfect for you. It’s a very niche concept but the author has executed it brilliantly.While the “mc” is disgustingly pitiful, his system actually has a good personality (and not in the weird sentient system that feels forced and is a tsundere type of way). Also, his interactions with the side characters are genuinely entertaining (except when he starts feeling proud, then I wanna die just a little bit?)Another thing to note is that mc perfectly exemplifies the deadly sins and why they’re so disdained, makes for a really well-written character even if they’re written to be hated. All in all, really fun read and I’m looking forward to seeing what the author cooks up.
the story is very poetic! you have a good vocabularies! keep up the good work!
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This book is really totally amazing and totally worth reading ?..Great job to the wonderful author ?
Story is good but the way Author implement and narrate it is terrible every single character wants to kill MC god knows why
The story can be slow at times, but its a really good story. Many people get frustrated at the mc, but I enjoy his charachter design and how he acts. I'm a big fan of world building as well so the different places he travels to are always exciting. The author also tries to interact with the readers. They aren't originally english speaking so there are grammer and spelling errors. If you can get around that and just learn to enjoy the novel it'll take you to another world.
Great novel! This novel is the most immerive novel I have ever read. The character has both viewpoints of a Mortal and immortal. With politics and logic it makes it so much more realistic, immersing yourself in the helplessness of how tragic the outcome fates give to you and unresigned, you would fight against that fate.
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