this is a great novel. just a shame it never got picked up it has spectacular world building and character's design it's just a shame all these great novels are fading in to the background while other novels that are uninterested or start of great later because trash keep on going while this one never got a chance
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This story is wonderful. Beyond that even! I couldn't put it down. Everything is so... I want more! Please give me more! I would recommend this story to everyone.
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I really wanted to write a good review, but I just suck at thinking of words that convey my thoughts.So yeah... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp. Currently on chapter 70 Very nice so far.
Hey everyone I’ve quit reading for a while because of novel quality and translation quality drops in trial reads but this one is quite good people. Translation? Great! Story? I like it and that’s enough for me! Really, I just hope translation quality like this can be more widespread because I’m dying from all the garbage that are out there. Anyway check this one out and read it for a bit. I really like it.
Really big fan of this story so far! It is very well written without too many noticeable mistakes, has an interesting no nonsense MC (with a good excuse for why he would be living in a game world 24/7), and the game world itself is extremely enticing already with plenty of room to grow as the story progresses. Can't wait to read more!
Translation for free chapters are excellent. After the free chapter, it went downhill. It is still readable but not as consistent as the free chapters. For example, his first summon is called "yellow" then became "ah Huang" or it was called"yellow scarf soldier to "yellow bandana". it will rattle your reading immersion a little bit.
The author keeps changing the names of people , techniques, sects and other official divisionsIts a translation thing, not a grammatical thing but still makes it hard for an immersive experience Just fix the translation and its an easy five star novel
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Interesting read, so it might be good for it to go forward. MC is OP right now to those who are wondering, not sure if it's going to keep on being that way.
It's a good story at start but as the story goes forward the MC starts to become a simp. Always relying on his spirits and his women to fight for him. At some point even if he has forbidden arts to help him ,he still can't defeat his women(not even the simple tianshi who was a normal human like him). He literally has no talent in anything and always relies on his spirits for everything