Another great novel to look forward too.. Hopefully it will make me more excited to read everydayyyyy.. Impress me Mr author! ?????????????????
Myriad of info dumps, literally the few early chapters are all info dumps for no reason nor logical flow to it.There are a lot of incosistency in term of the story flow or the lack there of, overall below average read.
This your author, sorry for not writing for a long since I felt that I made the MC too OP. Everytime I write, I get confused in the status numbers as there are too many and needed to be accurately calculated but I tried to minimize it as I can. Sometimes I can't make of a single sentence due to focusing too much on the numbers causing some of my phrase to be BLAND.I dont know if I'll post a chapter so maybe, JUST maybe, I'm going to stop
Great story by the great Rabbink.......................................................................................................................by the hottest ice
Great book for now, the updates are unstable but the content is amazing.............................................................
Hello all!As you can probably tell, I am the author of the Perfect Specimen. After getting my feet wet by writing over 15 chapters so far I realize how fun it can be creating a world and letting others explore it with me! I have many more novel ideas in mind but I'm trying to find my writing style so please if there are any critiques you have let me know! I don't have a glass heart and I will keep writing with all negative and positive comments in mind!Granted I would prefer the positive ones more!Hope you enjoy my novel, but most of all, thank you for giving it and me a chance!
The plot is interesting but I find the characters childish and gullible. The grammar is also very horrendous and this is the worst part. Although the story is interesting, the grammar is really annoying and worsens the story, even if I’m able to read it.View More
Its really good.
The world background and power system is nothing new but it's good enough.the problem is mc is a naive hypocrite, the type i hate the most. You know it's really ridiculous how he stop killing the wolves simple because he see the leader have a kid, and even kill the other enemy beast to protect the wolves simple because of this like the other beast dont have kid too.the fighting scenes are to bad too, and if author wanted to make this more of a farm nobel he should set the tone in the prologue this way even if the future fight scenes are trash not many people will care. For now my review is this,but I will continue with this novel in my library so when I forget about this fic content I can do.e back to read and see if author raised the quality at that time I will decide if I change my rating
Compared to other novel the update is too slow they should have at least stock some chapters after all they were in the voting phase for more than 1 month
So have been reading this up to v2 cap 3 and I have to say it's some very mature/dark novel until now, after every chapter you want to know how the MC is going to cope, with the latest sh$t he is thrown into.I have some high hopes for this one ;)
even if u start changing the story at chapter 100 there is still 100 chapters that completely copied from the original no one is gonna w8 for u to copy and paste 100 chapters till u decide to change the story