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really enjoyable read. read almost nonstop in 2 days. Great job
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I have no idea what I'm reading, no idea who the characters are, no idea what is the background, the year, the names and motivations of the characters, not even a hint. Read this book as if you were starting from the second or third in a series of books and it might make sense, we're being bombarded with characters and information that are introduced in three lines and that's it.
when I started this novel I honestly did not get my hopes high but the comedy and our mc's actions caught me off guard.Really this might become one of my favorite novels simply based on mc's action and a good number of smut chapters.I hope nothing changes to mc's personality as the novel progresses, I like how he thinks and it makes this whole novel more desirable and enjoyable.thank you for the amazing novel you have presented to us.
Here from royalroad gonna re-iterate what I said there The pacing takes a nosedive from around chapter thirty onwards, one character becomes gay and I don't understand why I need to know character's sexuality then one becomes lesbian I guess, I don't know I skimmed from part one epilogue onwards but at this point I think the author is JK Rowling, I think the author had severely overworked himself and forgot how he was supposed to get from one plot point to another, Please And I Mean PLEASE Take Some Time To Go Back And Re-Write The Story, I don't care if you're going to publish or not but start rewriting because it's turned me off from the story so much I can't read it anymore, I like this story the concept is immaculate but the execution takes a nosedive please read your reviews otherwise this is how you become like another creator I know who refused to re-write until his story was finished.
Do not read this you will get addicted...
This story has potential. The protagonist looks like a 1000-year-old virgin when he finds himself being used by a beautiful girl, but it is acceptable, since she is the only one counting him with the supernatural world.If you realize that everything he experiences is new to him, then you will not hate this story: Remember that he was gaining little and was only eating, sleeping, and working for your all life.Usually all MC cares about their life first and then their shortcomings. The MC took a while to realize his shortcomings, but he quickly corrects them.The novel's progress is also acceptable.
Interesting novel but has some problems. Writing is very bad, full of mistakes, which makes it very hard to read and understand. besides there are many parts that have not been explained but things just happen.
its like those chinese webnovels 'the world online' and 'the lords empire' well without the blatant racism. characters could have been more descriptive for greater immersion along with better world building. ngl kind of boring the mc doesnt really do anything he just delegates. great for wasting time just as i did ?
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