The developers claimed the app "Webnovel" will be filled with fun and innovative authentic stories but why do it seem to me like 90% of the new novels released every week are trash? "I might be the odd one out!
Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.
A decent story that's well written and actually worth reading. I hope this will get picked up and translated properly. Till then I'll have to make do with MTL which is less than ideal.
I was very excited about this novel but in the end it turned out that the title and the story are fake as the novel is bad and just an old harem to satisfy the desires of the author
Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Super good¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I honestly don't know what to review here. I just like story. Or more accurately, the MC. I've always like a little psychopathic MC, but not the really heartless one, cause they're boring. And I like that the author decided to include his friend. I looked for many stories, but most of them are about romance. It's a nice breath of fresh air to include friendship in. Basically, this novel fulfills two condition that I've always been looking for, a crazy but funny MC, and things other that just romance. please keep up the good work author ^_^
SPOILER: This is only part one of a novel that has yet to be fiinished. After reading the author's final comments at the end of the novel, I can now understand while it was lacking in many areas. I liked the MC who wasn't OP and lived the morally gray area. It think the MAS was extremely under utilized and, too me, barely mattered in the MC's journey unlike most related novels. The lack of closure is also disappointing but I underrstand the author's reason. For a 1st novel, it was a decent start. I definitely liked the author's White Online novel much better. I hope to see a continuation of this story in the future.
I dropped because there is like 30 characters POV on those nobody care about 25. And POV swap 2 to 5 times per chapter. + sometimes its for the same event ?sometimes 2 peoples talk to each other than we switch POV to have the same dialogue over again with the other one POV. It can be good from time to time but you find this at least once every 4 5 chapter.
Such a sweet story!!!????
The characters r well portrayed
The couples r way to cute?????
This novel is really a hidden treasure
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I really like this book. Too lazy to say anything else.... La la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la...
Writing quality: I'd say it's pretty good, though it may be a bit unrefined and messy. The grammar is fine, with some occasional mistakes that get corrected almost immediately once pointed out. Stability of updating: More often than not, the author updates 2 chapters a day. Sometimes, there's only one chapter, and rarely, there's no chapter at all. When that happens, the author tries to compensate in the future. Emphasis on "tries".Story development: The story is kind of rushed but it's developing quite nicely. Uses clichés but I'd like to think the author uses it in a way that makes fun of or builds upon it, rather than just copying and pasting the cliché. Cons are that romance is kind of unrealistic, an indication that the author is inexperienced in that field. Character design: I like the characters. There are some that are black-and-white but there are hints that they'll get fleshed out in the future. Also WARNING this is a harem, but the girls exhibit different personality traits and are unique from each other. World background: This is the part where it's really just straight ripped off of other stories. Well, I can't say for certain since it's only in Chapter 39 and the world might get more interesting in the future, but so far it's bland and boring. Thanks for listening to my TEDTalk.
Well written and very creative. I can really feel the emotion of the main character throughout her journey. I can't wait to see where the story goes.