MTL have 149 chapters. This is short novel
love the unique concept but sometimes status are difficult to see clearly but in all its interesting hope its does not have harem and all the generic cliché
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review from chapter 88. story so far has just been meh. It really is a nice read but bland. I feel as though the Mc is a Gary stu. most females easily fall for him. gets married out of nowhere easily. Mc constantly keeps having things go his way. He is op for his level. fighting above his level constantly. So if you really like op Gary stu Mc read this. I'm not trying to be mean as well. It is just the way I see it. which has made me drop it. Since I just find to boring at this point.
no harem = 5☆
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Great so far. I'm at ch 199 currently.
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This story looks like it will be good. I'll change my review to 5 stars if is can get some editing into something I can actually understand.
a very unprofessional book.Villagers pierce the skin of the bear, which she barely pierced , with a bamboo spear and pin the bear to the ground.Then mc pierced the skin of the bear, which he could not pierce before, with almost the same arrow on the ground.Also, it keeps changing the numbers in the same section, this is most likely the fault of the person who translated it.It is worth mentioning that before the bear episode, the main character cuts a large wolf pack alone.in the next episode he is running away from this bear but for some reason the wolf king is stronger than the bearbecause the bear does nothing while the wolf king is using the spell
Very good novelHave lot of potential Shame it doesn’t have much view and reviews___________________________________________________________________________________________________
Why are Chinese peasants so stupid and greedy? I thought maybe it was just bad writing for a novel but every novel is like this. It must be based on reality.
Hmm where should I start?? First of all for those who like legendary mechanic this novel has the same characteristics with different world background. The start of story is rather confusing and not interesting enough for me. The story has a slow pace that you will find the chapter mostly talked about his daily story, well a lot of preparation thing before the player (Beta) start appearing at chapter around 20 I think. To be honest the story itself was actually good and has a good potential (I don't read the raw, it's based on this trial read) but the one that will turned you off will be the translation. A lot of sentence in the novel don't made sense, it the way that it was missing a lot of information that affected the detail of the story.Well I'll end it here, I'll edit it later after reading all 40 Chapter.
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