As soon as I started reading the book I was already drawn into Genevieve's world... The gestures, body language, the flow and attention to detail Is extremely beautifully artistic... Definitely adding this to my reading list awesome just awesome... [img=update]
To be honest, the start of the novel was not so good...the vocabulary needs improvement too, dialogues didn't looked good...in the first two chapters, it still hasn't explained what is going on. Who is the mc? what is Mythical Realms
trash he has a god complex when he met god before he reincarnated
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The major flaw of this novel is the MC.
It is almost like there are two different people living inside him. The Master and the Child.
The Master is calm and composed, remembers the life and experience of the alchemy emperor and is generally well adjusted.
The Child appears every time the author needs to show just how awesome the MC or his Chinese heritage is. I really don't get why glorifying yourself and your country is such a big deal. The child is also a attention seeker.
But, a split personality is not really a no go for a novel. The trouble starts when the Child does stupid things that only serve to delay the progress of the story as well as causing troubles for the Master to solve.
In one moment the MC is composed and knows when to act, but in the next he seeks trouble everywhere.
But don't take my word for it. Let me give you an example.
MC needs to take a basic alchemy exam to be able to rent a furnace. It is a 24h available online only exam.
What the MC needs to do is get it done. What he does is take the maximum number of available exams in one go.
There is literally no benefit, as far as we and the MC at that point in time know, to taking more exams. But the child seeks attention.
At school the avarage grade MC shows of knowledge about seals he should not know, but because of his lucky chance he is now a native speaker of the otherworldly language. As a result he gains scrutiny by his teacher and classmates, a rival who will continue to antagonize him and a possible one sided love interest. There is no benefit to standing out, no grades no additional resources. He literally does it to show off and embrace the class monitor (antagonist).
The MC lack of common sense, the stupid attention seeking and his desperate pleas for other to notice his unusual increases in strength do not fit his background as a hard working poor student who is used to being disadvantaged.
Anyone who has been overlooked and disadvantaged by the extended family and the public at large will gain at least a little bit of maturity and a sense of caution. Not to mention his father shows how to keep quiet while working towards a better future.
Even the younger sister shows a very mature attitude. An attention seeker would have never had a good relationship with a disabled sibling who by default would have needed much more care and attention.
All of this before the MC gained centuries of experience and knowledge.
The idea and framework of the novel are wasted by the author because he desperately tries to increase word count by creating useless conflicts while regularly destroying his own characterization of the MC.
This is the best cultivation novel I read. I have only read couple of the giant cultivation novels till the last available chapter, but I certainly gave many of them a try. Even among the ones that kept me engaged till the end, this novel is the best of the best.
In here we can find a protagonist that seeks strength to protect his loved ones. He is generous to those who help him and is a ruthless devil for those who offend him. No matter what he does, in the end I find all those actions perfectly agreeable.
Oh by the way, I love the new cover and the synopsis.
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As our stat reviewers have already said, this novel is trending right now in Qidian, with good reason. From reading the first 20 chapters, I'm hooked on it. The MC has no system, and within a world where it isn't strange for the death penalty to be handed out like candy, our MC can only use his cop skills to save himself.
That he does brilliantly, and I love it. But what's better, is the flavor of humor and seriousness in here. The author does a sublime job of mixing the both, and introducing amusing, realistic, comedy in new formats.
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Me encanta esta historia, los personajes y las situaciones son increíbles, aparte de las personalidades son excelentes, amo está historia. Una cosa que no me gustó fue la parte en donde les hicieron los exámenes para determinar el potencial de los participantes, me hubiera gustado que todo fuera más secreto.
give it sum time best fan fiction ever lol well please keep on rating it and Just fill it up with nursery rhymes. row row row row your boat gently down the stream merrily merrily merrily life is just a stream
Modern time, mc's 30 year old and discovers that he gained abnormal activities in his life, like vomiting after eating and increasingly better eyesight.
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UNLIKE most mc's who will immediately come on the conclusion that they changed race, the mc actually thinks on why he transformed and why is he getting stronger.
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He does research on his own body and looks up on internet. Story development in the first 54 chapters are related to mc researching his own body changes while also with some story here and there like for example a robber and a supernatural event.
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Yes, of course the novel can't go further without anything to write about, so MC isn't the only one with the abilities he has. But for now, I say he's the only human with the 'mutations'. And yes, he drinks blood for nutritions and energy.
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There's one potential female lead, but I dunno if it's gonna be harem - Advanced readers, please reply if you know!
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Translation Quality: Noice - 5*
SoU: Trial read - 5*
Story development: Could be better, but not bad in it's own right - 4.5*
Character design: Good - 5*
World Background: only 60 chapters, but it's has some mystery at the end so - 5*
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