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Overall a good storry, but it has it´s faults as well.
First of all the characters, the main character is the only one who we get to know really, the rest just apear for a couple of chapters and become irelevant rather quickly. He rarely has conversations with people that last more than a couple of sentences, it would be nice to increase his relations and interactions with the people arround him. (Idon´t know your future plans so maybe this is already planed) furthermore the mc is becoming more and more powerful physically but he doesn´t show much emotion other than his strict planing. I mean he has crazy high iteligence but everybody has his faults, there are no perfect people.
The story development is solely focused on the mc and where he goes, there are some mentions and short pov´s of the villains but nothing major yet. It would be nice to learn more about the backhround and everthing that is going on arround him.
The aspect of world background is in my opinion pretty good overall. The only problem I have is that we know where he is, what he does but not much more. We rarely get decriptions of his suroundings or other stuff like this.
As a final note, this is my first review of any kind of storry I´v read. So this it probably rather subjective and partly wrong so read it yourself. It is a great story if you like story with an insanely powerful mc who gets stronger and strong in short period of time.
Finaly to the author: please try to increase the chapter length, your story is great but it would be even better with longer chapters, this way we as readers can imerse ourselfes more and not just read 5 minutes or so each day and forget what happened the next.
P.S. English isn´t my first language so go easy on my gramar
So far I’m hooked! The use of the Druid class as his base for the character is awesome! Inheriting his fathers knowledge and legacy adds some weight to his adventures! The world both in game and out are starting to come together nicely! Looking forward to more!
A novel written for action fans, who like a little romance and comedy. The novel is short, so you can read it when you don't have too much time.
This would be continued after a long time.I like Apocalypse but I can't write it~~~~ too hard. I'm short of action words...but I still love it. Kudos for me lol ????????
A bit slow but well written with steady growth pace. This is a tower defense novel, and our MC is the city lord. If you enjoy strategy than this is for you.
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Idk about others but I found this novel hilarious. It's similar to another vrmmorpg novel with a white hair protagonist which I don't remember the name of but better. Feel free to disagree to me
Level 10 in Ep 40. This story is too slow peaced and I think the reason is because author want to make Ep no higher. Mc is just an ordinary person who got a system by luck. Even after he got a system, he is still ordinary. Dont get me wrong, he skills has potential just that He is not someone who is keep trying to get stronger. So, what do he do? He saves everyone he see and makes meal for them. You will also see a lot of information dump and he shows differences POV just to make the ep longer. After saving the first girl and just by eating meal together, he wants to kiss the girl when he is leaving. I have read a lot of novels and Mc in dire situation is where he do something impossible or in very extreme situations. Here? you will see a lot of almost death situations because The author wants to show character development. And He was saved by so call 'Plot Armor'. The novel is funny in so many way. I gave 3 stars because all authors should at least get it. Not because it is to my liking.