Shameless author review here. I’ve poured a lot of effort into this story, the world, and its characters. I’m really glad to have people read it and share their opinions. It’s too early to talk much about the quality of the novel since there are only 6 chapters as of the time I’m writing this. However, I can assure you that this is a very active experienced, this novel. I will constantly tweak old chapters and update the novel. I plan to spend many months working on it. I hope you’re ready for this journey. Usually I would review my own novel, talking about the story but for this novel you really just need to read it.
This is one of the best novel that I have read. It’s storytelling and the world development is definitely peak good job author keep it up
I like the story so far. Great job mr. author.
The only thing I don’t like is the MC character being inconsistent. Sometimes he is determined and acts like a normal grownup, sometimes he acts like a child being dragged by the nose by others.
As far as im concerned, this is a good book by Einlion, and i have greatly enjoyed reading it so far. It remains to be seen how far the story will go, however, i do hope that the author doesnt lose motivation and sees the story to its completion, as someone who once tried his hand at writing, i am fully aware of how difficult of a challenge that is, so keep going and dont give up!
Loved the story! Keep up the good work, author!
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
When the title is wrong, you know the translator screwed up
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Author AK here, 5 stars for self-promoting. If you want a slow-paced novel with a fantasy setting, this one will pique your interest. The first two volumes are mostly about MC's adventure, but the plot will thicken during the third volume. Also, pay attention to the strange incidents in this novel. Hmm, that's it. MC won't be too smart, but not too dumb. He will be more like an average guy. tt ❤️ ❤️ ❤️Anbe Sivam (Love is God)❤️ ❤️ ❤️
you get better everytime, try your best, don't give up the novel it's quite good for my opinion, some gramitical errors but still I Like the story
Woooooow what a nice story.Kindly come with the next chapter early.Whatever a man sow that's what he shall reap, let us all learn a good lesson from this story and our lives will be extraordinary. God bless you.
This is giving me chess game of the gods vibes from the description and those were fun stories though sadly kinda died out due to the genre of itI’m hoping great things from you