A very interesting book. From the start I thought it was star wars then if became like magic. Maybe like Jedi in star wars. What do you think. Is force the magic?
I thinks it's a good one,just took an overview of this piece....the cover is even more than awsome I guess and the concept too..I guess it will do nice....
its not that bad but its not amazingthe grammat is good and he had thought about the world and wjat he eants from it. but if i look at the character and develepment it feels mote like a anti hero story than a true villain story. i also dislike how soon the mom was killed off. i usually cry if that happens but i didnt even feel any connection to her and het death wad more like a introduction on why he would hate heroes while his dad was also used and sacrificed by them. also some old dude wanted to give him powers without even knowing him and he rejected 2 times without knowing the deal behind it. wasted opportunity tbh. but all else its a fun book to read. i like how he doesnt know his powers and even gets to confident. would rate it 3.5/5 and will read it to see where it goes
Honest review after 90+ chapters! A lot of people have been thrown off in the first chapter because of the MC's attitude, and especially since he got a green hat, like what the synopsis stated. However, I assure that this only happens in the first chapter. After he got the system, his worldview would slowly change, and his way of handling things would change for the better as well. As long as you can get past the first chapter, I assure you that his attitude shown in the first chapter won't show up again. Now, as English is not my main language, it is subpar compared to others. A lot of readers have also been correcting my mistakes, which I appreciate quite a lot. For updates. I usually upload 1 chapter a day but with bonus chapters obtained from weekly goals, and bonus chapters from sponsors, I would sometimes upload more than 3 chapters in a single day. Story development. As this is a kind of slice of life and wish fulfillment story, the story does not progress very quickly where more than a week will pass after a single chapter. Character design is okay. Although it might not be the best, but I assure you that I sure did my best to make them more alive. World background is also being slowly introduced to avoid info dumps as much as possible. That's all. I hope you give this novel a try! Thank you!
Are you review-botting your books or what? All accs only reviewed this book and one more, probably your other book.I haven't started reading yet but I will update my review if it's good.
I read this book till chapter 75 but the pywall starts at chapter 6. I don't think the book is worth paying for but it's still way better than most things you find here.I could swear I have read this book or a part of it before, the plot seemed familiar. Maybe in my early webnovel days.I don't wanna spoil the plot but basically the MC gets rich and powerful after an inheritance. Yet he doesn't show off and still gets looked down on by his classmates for being poor. I really like this kind of hidden wealth and power stories. There's some face slapping involved but not that excessive and over the top like you would find in many other Chinese face slapping novels here. I like that.To the writing: There aren't any major mistakes or things to take note of. The writing quality is average. There's room for improvement to "fill in" the story and add a little more details. All the characters lack the same dept but it's still okay to read (not just worth the coins tbh).The story so far were the typical troubles hidden rich MCs come across in this kind of genre. Not bad but also nothing really outstanding and interesting.Still, you should check the story on your own and build your own opinion. It's worth a try, maybe you'll like it.
good story so far but has a lot of typos. especially with power levels and names........................... . ............................. .
The sentence arrangement and word choice made me want to keep reading, but unfortunately, some chapters were too short for me, or maybe I was too busy reading that I didn't feel the time was passing so fast
its a very good book if you are into stories that evolve around history and facts. hint of past present and foreshadowing is amazing the future chapters have a lot of potential
please more more morei like the story very mutch
THE MC IS OP AND HAVE A GOOD BACKGROUND.I DONT HATE HIS CHARACTER AS I WAS BORED ON READING SOME NOVELS WITH A RIGHTEOUS MC..........................
the story is fine but the details of intercourses are very detailed but the battles aren't.. its just weak spot here they solve it themselves and done win.but when it involves intercourses it's literally detailed to the point that it's even showed as a custom in parts of the kingdom.