Wait actually ignore my comment I realize what you're talking about now yeah now I don't even know what's going on I'm very confused
It’s better than I expected.
The first few chapters are a little rougher but I love the story so far
This max reminds me of a more likable Jonathan and a overall better mc.
Chapter 38 is when the novel takes a nose dive mc becomes a pig for jade beauty. Author is farming clicks with bait villain tag he should remove the tag and I will remove this comment.
.................... not bad at all ....................
I love this book???? it's one of the best novels I have ever heard I only wish It was completed ??
I'm reading the manhwa of this and I want to read the story i more depth so I looked for the novel itself.
The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision
this book is good if not AI translate it would on top 10
I've only just started reading this novel and so far i'm really enjoyig it but it seems to be missing a chapter between 21 and 22? part one of chapter 22's part two seems to be missing.
It's a really good read. The fact that it's completely free and contains almost 500 chapters is an even bigger bonus. The world-building is a strong point, and the egocentric and frankly "villainous" character of the main character adds to the originality of the story. Some narrative devices may be a little overused, but overall it's good. I hope this story won't be abandoned, good luck autor!
Are you planning to finish the novel....
I was honestly surprised with how much I enjoyed the first 20 chapters. While not perfect, the world is realistic enough and the story is logical and fun.The mc's cheat is both very op and not very op at the same time which is a very good sweet spot I think.