devil underneath the tricksters mask

It's a very light and entertaining read. I just don't like the instant attraction. I suggest detail more on the senses when narrating scenes like kisses or sexual tension. Like the smell, the heat, etc :)

I have noticed the chapters are being deleted and recreated several times while also being formated similar to a story on mtl nation. This work is being stolen and written with different choices and names.

Is this story dropped? It’s been a while since your last update. I was enjoying it quite a bit, I am looking forward to more!Please let me know author.

Hi everyone, I am the translator of SoG. Currently, the editor and I are working to produce more chapters. Please leave any comments or suggestions you may have regarding the story plot, characters or anything else! Thank you!

I love this book???? it's one of the best novels I have ever heard I only wish It was completed ??

Hey, got to say that this is a good novel. However, I noticed that there are some inconsistency. For example, the MC contradicting himself (chapter 24). Another example, MC's first meeting with the novel's original MC. The interaction ended awkwardly and were a bit abrupt with the MC's response. Other than a few bits and nitpicking those, the overall story is interesting and have a sense of story flow. Also, a last bit of advice to improve the story is by making a story map. The story map doesn't need to be fully or well made, the story map must be able to guide the story direction. That's it for this review.